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Senryu
Elegant and kind
Makes me pine and shine devine
Shows love with her eyes
Author's Note
Thoughts in a spare format illuminating a path through human connection...
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Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 2:53pm
Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 3:11pm
Artists are often romantics, we feel and see a lot
Appreciate the comment NG 😎
Appreciate the comment NG 😎
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 2:55pm
I don't think I have ever seen you do a Senryu PS; it's definitely a good format for you because this is so beautiful. The eyes are the window to the soul so you must be making her happy. ;)
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Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 3:14pm
I do my best Kx
I like the 575 format
You know I like to go BIG on content and short on words ...
You may see more, who knows
Appreciate the nod
🤠
I like the 575 format
You know I like to go BIG on content and short on words ...
You may see more, who knows
Appreciate the nod
🤠
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 3:29pm
Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 3:36pm
It’s been awhile since I attempted one of these 575
It’s a different way of thinking
Appreciate the LDF approval
Thx L
✅👍
It’s a different way of thinking
Appreciate the LDF approval
Thx L
✅👍
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 5:11pm
Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 5:48pm
First rhyme session in forever
Not usually my thing but worked fine this time — more rhyme
What’s to become of me Xx
Thx k
X
Not usually my thing but worked fine this time — more rhyme
What’s to become of me Xx
Thx k
X
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 8:07pm
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27th Sep 2021 8:14pm
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 8:15pm
good afternoon dearest Poet I love this
shows love with her eyes beautiful...
shows love with her eyes beautiful...
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Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 9:37pm
I'm not always rough
There's a heart lurking
Wanting to give .....
Appreciate the RL Brenda
❤
There's a heart lurking
Wanting to give .....
Appreciate the RL Brenda
❤
Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 9:36pm
Dear PS,
This is a beautifully romantic write. Digging this side as the yin to your own yang. To be so admired is, to me, the greatest gift. Lovely. H 🌷
This is a beautifully romantic write. Digging this side as the yin to your own yang. To be so admired is, to me, the greatest gift. Lovely. H 🌷
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Re: Re. Senryu
27th Sep 2021 10:59pm
Dear H
I'm humbled and honored by your comment.
I can do it when I get the calling
Stay tuned ...
Love the validation and RL
PS
🤠
I'm humbled and honored by your comment.
I can do it when I get the calling
Stay tuned ...
Love the validation and RL
PS
🤠
Re. Senryu
28th Sep 2021 2:34am
You nailed it. Loved the beautiful sentiment and the effortlessly smooth delivery Poet.
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28th Sep 2021 2:36am
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28th Sep 2021 6:44pm
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29th Sep 2021 11:42am
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18th Oct 2021 11:56pm
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