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29th Sep 2021 4:14pm
dear Summer Rain
might i suggest that you reformat the poem to look more like a feather
and not use the photo of the feather
i think your message would come across stronger
a warm smile
silent lotus
might i suggest that you reformat the poem to look more like a feather
and not use the photo of the feather
i think your message would come across stronger
a warm smile
silent lotus
30th Sep 2021 3:03am
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. I appreciate it. But I don't know how to reformat it into a feather. It's a prompt🙂
17th Oct 2021 5:08pm
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