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Weak Tongue
Evil is good tortured by thirst
when it thirst it drinks evil
evil comes to those that swagger
and the evil has a wet tongue
but even the turtle
does not walk backward
when escaping from the dark hare
when it thirst it drinks evil
evil comes to those that swagger
and the evil has a wet tongue
but even the turtle
does not walk backward
when escaping from the dark hare
Published 24th Sep 2021
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Quite a compelling philosophy and really a darker twist to the Tortoise and The Hare...sent a chill down my spine to be quite honest..the premise of Evil doing what evil does..that really stood here, sort of like the song the Evil That Men Do...sorry Maiden moment...this quite contemplative penning that captures the dark side quite resoundingly...really liked this penning alot Adagio
24th Sep 2021 1:56pm
27th Sep 2021 00:28am
Profound and philosophical for sure. 'when it thirsts it drinks evil' wow, that is such a great characterization. Good and evil, it's all grey isn't it...
27th Sep 2021 00:39am
