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Fall(ing)
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 23rd Sep 2021
Author's Note
From the changing smells and sights, to the heady nostalgia that washes over, leaving me lovingly on the cusp of tears; Fall is absolutely hands down the most awesome time of the year.This is a little slice of my undying autumn appreciation. (Halloween (squeeeee!!) is the yummy icing on the cake and totally deserving of it's own ode)
©Blu2021
Textured
smokey earth
Colors randomly burst—
excitedly
flaunting
burnt orange
brownish blush
to ravages
of fiery red
Crisp air
sweeps
a promising
wind of change
Peppering days
tangerine
golden
Awaiting...
©Blu2021
Textured
smokey earth
Colors randomly burst—
excitedly
flaunting
burnt orange
brownish blush
to ravages
of fiery red
Crisp air
sweeps
a promising
wind of change
Peppering days
tangerine
golden
Awaiting...
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 9:47pm
Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 9:36pm
I find Spring the best of seasons...it only gets better...btw I am a May child...lovely poem none the less....
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 9:44pm
I probably would enjoy spring a lot more if it weren't for the oppressive heat of FL for almost 8 months out of the year.... lol.... I bask in the reprieve fall offers.... I totally understand your reasonings, though... lovely time of the year as well, Lawrence!
I thank you for reading and finding a bit of loveliness here.... -
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🌹 - B
I thank you for reading and finding a bit of loveliness here.... -
🍃🌾🍂🍁🍁🍂🌾🍃
🌹 - B
Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 9:44pm
This piece goes perfectly with the pic, it perfectly describes fall as a period of transition. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 9:50pm
That's awesome you think so, Me.
There's excitement in the air... even when I know that the rest of the country will get a cool taste of Fall before that weather finally makes it's way down, reaching Central Florida..... I can't wait!!! 🎉
lol.
Thanks for the kind words, I adore your support
🍃🌾🍂🍁🍁🍂🌾🍃
-B
There's excitement in the air... even when I know that the rest of the country will get a cool taste of Fall before that weather finally makes it's way down, reaching Central Florida..... I can't wait!!! 🎉
lol.
Thanks for the kind words, I adore your support
🍃🌾🍂🍁🍁🍂🌾🍃
-B
Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 10:45pm
Re: Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 10:49pm
That's deeply astute, CS...
Nice seeing you.... Your piece I just read was incredible..
I'm still marinating on my comments..
Lol...
Thank you for stopping by,
🌹 - 💙
B
Nice seeing you.... Your piece I just read was incredible..
I'm still marinating on my comments..
Lol...
Thank you for stopping by,
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
23rd Sep 2021 11:24pm
Awww.... me, too BP.... Such true natural beauty....like a painting.
I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful comments and your very generous list add.... Like a deer in headlights, I am so grateful and happy you decided to visit.... I have missed your presence on my page ...it's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 -B
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I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful comments and your very generous list add.... Like a deer in headlights, I am so grateful and happy you decided to visit.... I have missed your presence on my page ...it's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 -B
🍃🍂🍁🍁🍂🍃
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 00:16am
hello beautiful Blue what a gorgeous poem
I love the juxtaposition of peppering and tangerine💗
I love the juxtaposition of peppering and tangerine💗
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 00:36am
Thanks so much, Brenda...I'm all smiles that you enjoyed :)
I'm so grateful for your visit and the generous RL add... that's truly kind.
Hope you have terrific evening
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x
—B
I'm so grateful for your visit and the generous RL add... that's truly kind.
Hope you have terrific evening
🍃🌾🍂🧡🍁💛🍂🌾🍃
x
—B
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 00:29am
The colors of fall are very beautiful. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 00:42am
You totally speak truths, Francisco... they sure are!! You are kind, and I appreciate you.
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Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 2:00am
Autumn my favourite season, the colours the smells the change in the air
You captured this perfectly
Love and light
Ron x
You captured this perfectly
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 11:13am
Thanks, Ron.
Your visits and kindness mean so much to me. I deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, the generous list add and the love and support.... You are truly awesome, yourself.
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Your visits and kindness mean so much to me. I deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, the generous list add and the love and support.... You are truly awesome, yourself.
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 11:12am
You have brought nature alive, a most remarkable accomplishment.
(I totally dig your Halloween costume ;)
... Definitely my fav season.
(I totally dig your Halloween costume ;)
... Definitely my fav season.
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
This is my favorite time of the year... I am a creature of cosplay, so Halloween has always been my favorite holiday... Giving me yet another excuse to be in costume, Ohhh Hell yeah!!.... haha 😂.
I appreciate your thoughtfulness and kind words, C. Fall in Florida is kind of a mixed bag... Sometimes the heat is still so oppressive all the way through to November... Yet I dream of my northern roots... the colors, the smells and the crisp cool air that surrounded me on those Halloweens of years past ....Makes me want to drink apple cider and eat a cake donut!! .... hahahaha.
I deeply appreciate you and totally share your Halloween juju, too...
🌹 - 🖤
🎃👻🦇🕸🕷️🦉☠️🧛🏻♀️ 💀 🐺 🍬
I appreciate your thoughtfulness and kind words, C. Fall in Florida is kind of a mixed bag... Sometimes the heat is still so oppressive all the way through to November... Yet I dream of my northern roots... the colors, the smells and the crisp cool air that surrounded me on those Halloweens of years past ....Makes me want to drink apple cider and eat a cake donut!! .... hahahaha.
I deeply appreciate you and totally share your Halloween juju, too...
🌹 - 🖤
🎃👻🦇🕸🕷️🦉☠️🧛🏻♀️ 💀 🐺 🍬
Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 11:29am
Dude
I was actually going to inquire as to whether this might not in fact be a Halloween costume but rather an everyday sort of self expression, in which case my estimation of you (already high in the sky) would be even higher...
hahaha
Love it!
I will definitely dress up with you just because...
I was actually going to inquire as to whether this might not in fact be a Halloween costume but rather an everyday sort of self expression, in which case my estimation of you (already high in the sky) would be even higher...
hahaha
Love it!
I will definitely dress up with you just because...
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 11:41am
Hahaha!!
I might (she says so cheeky 😝) have the affinity for several random costume changes, just cuz.... Yes.... Mwahahahaha! (evil, but good laugh)
I am also a total nerd 🤓 and LOVE going to comic conventions dressed in Cosplay, too.... I will absolutely go to Comic-Con in San Diego... Once in my life!!!
It's a bucket list destination / activity!
Ohh we'd get you a kick ass costume. There's nothing better than dressing up as a team.... bahahahaha....
🧟🧟♂️ 🧛🏻♀️ 🧛🏻♂️ 🧝♀️🧝🏼 🧜🏻♀️🧜🏼♂️
I might (she says so cheeky 😝) have the affinity for several random costume changes, just cuz.... Yes.... Mwahahahaha! (evil, but good laugh)
I am also a total nerd 🤓 and LOVE going to comic conventions dressed in Cosplay, too.... I will absolutely go to Comic-Con in San Diego... Once in my life!!!
It's a bucket list destination / activity!
Ohh we'd get you a kick ass costume. There's nothing better than dressing up as a team.... bahahahaha....
🧟🧟♂️ 🧛🏻♀️ 🧛🏻♂️ 🧝♀️🧝🏼 🧜🏻♀️🧜🏼♂️
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 1:23pm
Hmmm a very compelled inspirational sense that really captures the focus on Autumn...I do love the autumn the colors and the cooler weather makes my heart smile...I really felt the warmth of your words here it has quite a smooth natural focus...that is inviting with a positive energy flow
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 1:36pm
Wow Randall!
Thanks for the very lovely and thoughtful comments. I appreciate you taking the time! It's so nice to share that commonality of the changing season to fall.... It feels cleansing, crisp and clean.
All my warmest regards,
🍃🌾🍂🍁🍁🍂🌾🍃
-B
Thanks for the very lovely and thoughtful comments. I appreciate you taking the time! It's so nice to share that commonality of the changing season to fall.... It feels cleansing, crisp and clean.
All my warmest regards,
🍃🌾🍂🍁🍁🍂🌾🍃
-B
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 2:55pm
Magnificent ... love the image ... the gentle flow ... like a fallen life on a cool crisp breeze ... great write B ...
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 2:59pm
Thanks so much for your lovely comments, LilD.... So happy you enjoyed it - Can't wait to finally have that first cold snap! ...
🌹 - 🍂🍁❄️
-B
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-B
Re. Fall(ing)
24th Sep 2021 9:16pm
Dearest, Lady Blue! Fall is such a wonderful relief for me. I yearn for the crisp from May on. Your note is as poetic as your poem. This passage made me tingle, "From the changing smells and sights, to the heady nostalgia that washes over, leaving me lovingly on the cusp of tears" Your description of the colors most of which we don't see in Texas is beautiful and exciting. Bravissima m Goddess friend🐻💞🐰
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Re. Fall(ing)
25th Sep 2021 6:41am
Re: Re. Fall(ing)
25th Sep 2021 6:54am
IKR!!
... and the raking of them into piles to be tediously disposed of.... Uggh 🙄....
lol.... still, pretty though...😏
*wink
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xoxo
... and the raking of them into piles to be tediously disposed of.... Uggh 🙄....
lol.... still, pretty though...😏
*wink
🍃🍂🍁🍂🍁🍃
xoxo
Re. Fall(ing)
29th Sep 2021 4:26pm
Re: Re. Fall(ing)
29th Sep 2021 4:30pm
You honor me with such kind words and your generous list add, Indreamz. You made me smile wide and feel such warmth, which I deeply appreciate-🙏🏻
Thank you for visiting!
I sincerely adore seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
Be well and stay safe,
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for visiting!
I sincerely adore seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
Be well and stay safe,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Fall(ing)
18th Oct 2021 6:42pm
Outstanding. Fall is my favorite season, the cool crisp air does fill one with nostalgia and memory.
Beautiful work Blue.
Beautiful work Blue.
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Re: Re. Fall(ing)
18th Oct 2021 6:49pm
Thanks for the generous list add, Walter.
Yep, I wholly agree and definitely look forward to Fall and the change of weather as well as the atmosphere surrounding attitudes, in general. Its a viscerally noticeable difference, I feel.... Refreshing!
I appreciate you, my friend
All my warmest gratitude for taking the time to participate in reading such a variety of my writes.
It's sooo super cool of you... - 👍🏻
Be well -
🌹-B
Yep, I wholly agree and definitely look forward to Fall and the change of weather as well as the atmosphere surrounding attitudes, in general. Its a viscerally noticeable difference, I feel.... Refreshing!
I appreciate you, my friend
All my warmest gratitude for taking the time to participate in reading such a variety of my writes.
It's sooo super cool of you... - 👍🏻
Be well -
🌹-B