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Still She Remained Alone

She remembered everything    
Soft parting of their lips  
Touching tongues and the rush of warm    
The feel of fingertips  
   
He remembered none of it  
He moved from soul to soul  
Possessing flesh was his only call    
He sought complete control    
   
Their bodies crashed together    
But spirits remained unknown  
Her flesh sang songs at his request    
Still she remained alone
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
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Author's Note
I wrote through the eyes of a past lover and how she must have seen our relationship at the time.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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