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The Broken Are the More Evolved
They say: Damaged.
I say: Evolved.
Society eyes
misidentify
What
is
in
these
Eyes,
And -
That’s okay,
To be unseen
is
Supreme:
I have learned
to
Welcome
That which
would
make of
Me
A
Haze
To take the haze
&
Make
A
Maze
Published 23rd Sep 2021
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23rd Sep 2021 2:17pm
24th Sep 2021 12:24pm
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2021 4:17pm
I look at it like a mosaic... I might be broken, sure... but when I put those broken pieces back together again, I end up with something even better or lovelier then before....
I really felt the deep message of this... from the ashes, kinda feel...
A Cipher maze... huh... so intriguing!
*wink
Killer write, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I really felt the deep message of this... from the ashes, kinda feel...
A Cipher maze... huh... so intriguing!
*wink
Killer write, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
24th Sep 2021 12:27pm
That is interesting. The process as a breaking away and reconfiguration of mosaic.
I like that very much.
(I recall a piece you did regarding the mosaic. Twas beautiful, so very beautiful.)
A Cipher maze... What a lovely concept.
Gratitude B.
I like that very much.
(I recall a piece you did regarding the mosaic. Twas beautiful, so very beautiful.)
A Cipher maze... What a lovely concept.
Gratitude B.
The broken are survivor's with no choice other then to Evolve.
The other choice is being stagnant.
Which, in my opinion, is like death since there is no growth.
Nice one!
The other choice is being stagnant.
Which, in my opinion, is like death since there is no growth.
Nice one!
24th Sep 2021 12:30pm
Such a wonderful perspective.
I would add that also perhaps once one is compelled to evolve, a capacity begins to evolve, organically, without compelling?
An evolution inside of an evolution?
Thought provoking.
Thank you Adelphina.
I would add that also perhaps once one is compelled to evolve, a capacity begins to evolve, organically, without compelling?
An evolution inside of an evolution?
Thought provoking.
Thank you Adelphina.
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24th Sep 2021 12:50pm
So smart R. or wise, rather.
Evolution really is just a concept, and I always think as such, when I speak it...
Nature just is, and is, I think, very much outside of our conceptualizations and quantifications...
I remember my uncle once talked about how there were cultures that didn't have a word for "depression", they just did what they did... lived their life...
(I am not saying there is no depression. but... that is perhaps a more pure way to exist, and a human, like nature, is perhaps far more expansive than the quantification, and maybe the quantification is a limitation.)
... I think you make a good point about education, and the natural expansion of the mind.
but I have found that formalized education can give certain forms of refinement or sophistication, regarding certain endeavors... but I honestly think only a certain percentage, in this milieu, are able to reap these benefits... (and perhaps they would have naturally come into these attributes... like you allude to.)
I think everything has the potential to edify or elevate.. or
cause to Evolve... hahaha
but then... it was all in the blue print, wasn't it?
Thought provoking R.
Many thanks and Blessings.
Evolution really is just a concept, and I always think as such, when I speak it...
Nature just is, and is, I think, very much outside of our conceptualizations and quantifications...
I remember my uncle once talked about how there were cultures that didn't have a word for "depression", they just did what they did... lived their life...
(I am not saying there is no depression. but... that is perhaps a more pure way to exist, and a human, like nature, is perhaps far more expansive than the quantification, and maybe the quantification is a limitation.)
... I think you make a good point about education, and the natural expansion of the mind.
but I have found that formalized education can give certain forms of refinement or sophistication, regarding certain endeavors... but I honestly think only a certain percentage, in this milieu, are able to reap these benefits... (and perhaps they would have naturally come into these attributes... like you allude to.)
I think everything has the potential to edify or elevate.. or
cause to Evolve... hahaha
but then... it was all in the blue print, wasn't it?
Thought provoking R.
Many thanks and Blessings.
