Southern night

A big nod from the Heart of Dixie ... well penned Kristina .... a definite keeper ...

You know it, LDF! Time to go get some apple pie moonshine.🥃 (the real stuff) :p Thank you so much for the comment and RL! I love 'a definite keeper' xo⛰️💖

Awesome write, loved it. Great read
Love and light
Ron x

Hey Ron! I am really happy you loved it. Thank you so much for the comment and RL! Sending you love and light from the Heart of Dixie! Now I need to do the UK rainy night version. ;) xo⛰️💖(I do miss the UK)

We like the breakdown of the he and she parts, the perfect southern love piece Lady. There's one line that references a train and we imagined westerns with the Chattanooga choo choos with smoke pouring out of the stack and some lover trying to make it home to Dueling Banjos or some song with a mouth harp simulating a train. Tight work Lady    

I am really happy you liked the breakdown and mentioned it, that was a new format for me so it's great to get feedback. I adore 'the perfect southern love piece' so much! Thank you for the wonderful comment. I do love trains, I miss them a lot from when I was in the UK growing up. Hanging out next to/in the train station getting into trouble. :p (but we are not going to talk about that) xo⛰️💖

Sending lots of sweetness your way BP, I really love that you enjoyed each moment! And I loved yours by the same name also. We were on the same wavelength thinking about southern nights. xo⛰️💖

This is a beautiful duet between lovers ..
My time in the south is limited but reading your poems
brings me to a sweet place of civility and a quieter pace.
These two are definitely in love.  It's not complicated when
baked right.  Key lime kisses abound..
And last but not least that last stanza brings the house down Kx

This is BIG LIKE COUNTRY

Really happy you enjoyed the duet aspect PS. You don't know what you are missing! ;) You need to head down to the mountains; it is truly one of the most spectacularly beautiful areas in the US. (no not bias at all, it's true :p) I love that I can bring you a little of the south through writing. Love always gets complicated doesn't it? except for LOVE of key lime kisses; a super tart key lime pie is divine. Thinking of Key West! Bringing the house down, hell YES! BIG LIKE... xo⛰️💖

I hope he was a perfect gentleman.  Keep on writing.

Hey Francisco! Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement. A southern gentleman... ;) xo⛰️💖

Beautiful, Kristina.
I love your softer writes 🌼

You made my morning AJ, you are a Master at writing romance and love so if you found it beautiful then I am so happy; like I contributed something. :) Hopefully I can give you some more softer writes that you love in the future. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts! xo⛰️💖

The moon reveals its captivating shoulders!! Love that image you put in my head.
And I love that I get a glimpse of how they feel towards each other.
Really great!!!

Oh Adelphina, you are too sweet to me. :) I was thinking is this a weird thing to say when I wrote that, but I am weird so... anyway, that you love the image is great! :) And I am really happy you liked the piece and the glimpse of feelings. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts! xo⛰️💖

oh lawd those southern nights...

Hullo

I see you’ve reinstated yourself as a fine poet of DU. good stuff, not a minute too soon neither.

I love this, it’s very beautiful. not sure you need “with their eyes” after when the constellations wink from the sky. only because it’s mostly a given a wink is from an eye. unless otherwise implied. that said I don’t think it takes away from the body

the body is beautiful, both hers and his. well done lay


*hat tip*

Oh yes! you have to be careful not to get lost in this Southern night. ;) Regarding re-instating; thank you so much, I consider that a huge compliment from you lepp. :)

So funny you mentioned that, my OCD really struggled with if I should leave that or not but alas leaving it won out in the battlefield that is my mind. I often say things in a weird way so sometimes it is just what it is. :p I am glad it does not detract though.  

I am so happy you found it to be beautiful! and a 'well done lay' damn right! always ;) ... xo⛰️💖

The poetic dialogue between the two lovers is extremely romantic, as if their words are making love. Amazing verbal foreplay depicting true soulmates. Beautiful!
NG🌹

I love your comment so much, your expression is absolutely beautiful and poetic. I really love the thought of 'their words are making love'. I am so happy you felt like it was worthy of true soulmates. Just such a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts! xo⛰️💖

Dear K,

What to say when it has all been said? Ethereal beauty. It was like watching Apollo and Aphrodite in the corner on Mt Olympus having a private conversation. Stunning imagery and oh such romantic language. Beautiful. H🌷

Your words are always so meaningful. You have really conjured such amazing imagery for me with your comment. I love mythology and the thought of Apollo and Aphrodite having a conversation is just beautiful. I am so happy you found it very romantic with stunning imagery; knowing that is so amazing! Might even make me less reluctant to post which is definitely an accomplishment. :) xo⛰️💖

Wonderful and amazing verse Kristina. Lines like "the sky reads poetry in a whisper to the lovers ..." and "the starry dust surrounds us with its bright brilliance" show the magic in the air, the bond between these two is very special.

Bravo.

That you think it is amazing verse makes it worthwhile to write and share. Oh, the magic of a Southern night is very beautiful and I tried to capture that here and that bond of love we all seek. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.  xo⛰️💖