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I'm not the one
Take my hand
in between
the kisses.
Let me
take part
in this
make-believe
and let the wind
blow away
the pieces
of my
broken heart.
in between
the kisses.
Let me
take part
in this
make-believe
and let the wind
blow away
the pieces
of my
broken heart.
Published 21st Sep 2021
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2021 7:26pm
Very good. I identified with this.
Anonymous
21st Sep 2021 11:09pm
The intensity of ache are truly profound.... it's talent that can express this...like you have.
I am moved by your brevity and I completely empathize, in understanding.
Fantastic ink.
Thanks for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I am moved by your brevity and I completely empathize, in understanding.
Fantastic ink.
Thanks for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
22nd Sep 2021 10:04am
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