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In My Dreams
in my dreams you're all mine
until the end of time
it's where I can hold you close
take off all your clothes
passionately kiss you all night
way into the morning light
you come and give my heart a hug
while I try to give yours a tug
you come into my world
while I give yours a whirl
where we are not afraid to love
so come on lets fly like doves
our juices flow all over
you're my four leaf clover
© 2021 flowergirl
until the end of time
it's where I can hold you close
take off all your clothes
passionately kiss you all night
way into the morning light
you come and give my heart a hug
while I try to give yours a tug
you come into my world
while I give yours a whirl
where we are not afraid to love
so come on lets fly like doves
our juices flow all over
you're my four leaf clover
© 2021 flowergirl
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Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 1:01am
flowergirl,
Aren’t dreams great! Light and airy, nothing scary. You can do it all within your dream walls. Love the interpretation of your dream. Enjoyed!
down2dirt
Aren’t dreams great! Light and airy, nothing scary. You can do it all within your dream walls. Love the interpretation of your dream. Enjoyed!
down2dirt
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 1:34am
Hey DD……yes yes……luv them……dreams keep imaginations inspired……sometimes they do come true…….thank you for the read and visit…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 1:08am
Beautiful dreamy piece my Purple princess
Love it, really lovely read
Love and light
Ron x
Love it, really lovely read
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 1:56am
Hey Ron……thank you for exploring my dreams…….they can be such inspirations…….honored by the RL……purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 2:34am
In your dreams you be receiving orgamic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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20th Sep 2021 2:51am
Hey Phantom……that’s the best thing about dreams…….the rewind like a movie……thank for the encouragement as always…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 2:52am
Hey PS…….for sure……vroom vroom…….thank you for the visit making me smile…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
21st Sep 2021 2:51am
Hey BP…….thank you for stopping by……happy you like this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 3:39am
I love that photograph! The purple violet is fantastic against the green of clover. This is much lighter, FloweredOne. And I LOVE that you used love vs luv. You're beginning to let go; and when you do, you're future is waiting. <3
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21st Sep 2021 2:53am
Hey Ahavati…….I thought the pic was perfect too……I appreciate all the encouragement and support you’ve given me to get thru this demise thru my poetry…….you’re a beautiful soul and friend……thank you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 7:50am
a great way to venture
through the beauty of dreams.
nothing better that finding that four leaf clover.
thank you for sharing
through the beauty of dreams.
nothing better that finding that four leaf clover.
thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
21st Sep 2021 2:56am
Hey Mystic……appreciate you sharing thoughts with me……sometimes the answer comes in form of a dream……thank you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
20th Sep 2021 11:51am
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21st Sep 2021 3:00am
Hey Cipher……thank you for your visit and taking time to comment……thrilled you like this……purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
21st Sep 2021 4:22am
Dear FG,
Love it. This poem is sweet with a little bit of saucey minx in there. The rhyming was subtle and effective and I do love me some romance! Lovely write. H🌷
Love it. This poem is sweet with a little bit of saucey minx in there. The rhyming was subtle and effective and I do love me some romance! Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
22nd Sep 2021 3:02am
Awe H…….I luv your response……..I luv a bit of romance too…….trying my skill in rhyming…….my muse is training me Lol! Thank you for making me smile…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
22nd Sep 2021 4:31pm
Echo Honoria (and others), really sweet romantic gem. The rhyming definitely works - something I think I am terrible at but not sure I ever really tried. :p I like the two line format. The picture is a great compliment. Really beautiful!
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22nd Sep 2021 6:51pm
Awe KX…….thank you for your amazing response……..I’m trying to work on rhyming but it’s not always easy…….your inks flow beautiful from your heart and soul…….don’t need to change anything……..you’re a fantastic writer……..glad you like the pic…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
23rd Sep 2021 5:41am
I really enjoyed these verses. Especially this one.
''you come and give my heart a hug
while I try to give yours a tug''
Very nice.
''you come and give my heart a hug
while I try to give yours a tug''
Very nice.
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
23rd Sep 2021 1:45pm
Hey Naajir…….I’m happy those lines were your favorite………appreciate you smiling upon my ink…….thank you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
24th Sep 2021 10:48pm
This is pretty good. Romantic, hopeful & filled with promise. I was looking out for that 4 leaved clover in your pic. ;-)
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
25th Sep 2021 3:07am
Hey Billy…….I’m honored you think it’s pretty good…….being a romantic as you are…….plus being the talent that you are…….I fond myself looking for one too…….I did find it…….it’s hiding in my heart……thank you for your kindness……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Oct 2021 1:15am
Re. In My Dreams
24th Sep 2021 10:51pm
To not be just the object of affection but also considered a person's lucky piece. Tight work with the flow on this one also, Lady
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25th Sep 2021 3:11am
Hey IS…….some souls in our lives……touch our hearts so much…….we see them in our dreams…….some come back into our lives just when we need them…….thank you for your always generous comments…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
Anonymous
27th Sep 2021 2:59am
Hey there luvly lady :)
As an avid lover of flowers myself, your picture drew my attention, right off the bat.. Then those lovely rhymes of yours completely captured my imagination.... I drifted off into that place of wonder and hope.... Where romance, desire and passion commingle and infuse a heart and mind with all the promise that dreams themselves elicit.....
Such a pleasurable and pretty read-🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
dear purple poetess
🌹 - 💜
xoxo
B
As an avid lover of flowers myself, your picture drew my attention, right off the bat.. Then those lovely rhymes of yours completely captured my imagination.... I drifted off into that place of wonder and hope.... Where romance, desire and passion commingle and infuse a heart and mind with all the promise that dreams themselves elicit.....
Such a pleasurable and pretty read-🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
dear purple poetess
🌹 - 💜
xoxo
B
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
28th Sep 2021 1:52am
Awe Blue…….you’re my second blessing tonight…….thank you for your graceful words…….always an encouragement to your smile upon my ink…….yes yes…….”that place of wonder and hope”……is so beautiful and peaceful……..imagination is a wonder to behold……..thank you again…….honored for the RL…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
8th Oct 2021 3:46am
Hey DW……..thank you for the gracious visit upon my ink…….you’ve shared luving thoughts with me…….. believe eye are a window to the soul…….I always believe dreams are…..at times a window of our future…….appreciate you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
18th Oct 2021 2:27am
Four leaf clovers are just so special and rare.
They carry legends and the magic of good luck.
Like finding someone who is that rare and special.
This is pretty cool.
They carry legends and the magic of good luck.
Like finding someone who is that rare and special.
This is pretty cool.
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18th Oct 2021 2:33am
Hey Adelphina…….thank you for your visit…….I have had rare moments in my life to meet some amazing souls…….yes they are rare & very special…….appreciate your words……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
18th Oct 2021 4:04am
Good poetry, I like the way you set up your dream world..very cool. You definitely mixed a lot in there too which is great. No fluff. I liked it, alot. Good work!🙏
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
23rd Oct 2021 1:20pm
Hey Swan……sorry for the late reply…….thank you for your graceful words……I’m glad you’re joyed this…….I luv to mix the emotions…….I believe dreams say a lot about the person you are……appreciate you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. In My Dreams
16th Jan 2022 9:12pm
Nice play with your last word last line, or at least I played with it in my mind, lol. Dreams are so melty like warm wax, do as you please with them and spill them down the page. Good write, keep it up, and with over 400+ poems I guess you are. :)
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Re: Re. In My Dreams
16th Jan 2022 9:20pm
Hey LB……..I luv writing…….dreams are visions to life at times……..thank you for smiling upon my ink…….you’ve encouraged me greatly……honored for the RL…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. In My Dreams
16th Jan 2022 10:28pm
I can see you do, and I agree about dreams, glad I could pique you to continue, ever more! ;-) <3
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29th Oct 2022 3:45am
Hey Leo, thank you for such an honorary comment, I’m glad my rhyming was good, it’s hard for me, doesn’t come natural but I’m thrilled you enjoyed this, purple luv & hugs :)