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Poetess XX
I once saw a human
get his face slashed
Wide open
Over a carton
of
milk,
Pulsating scarlet
silk
outlet
of
Deep red,
That made me
kind
of
Blue -
But as such things became common place
from
Face
to
face,
I felt only
Emptiness
or
nothingness…
But
Nothing
was
more
disappointing
than when
I
saw them
ravenous
for
the
blood
of
the
Poetesses
Published 18th Sep 2021
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18th Sep 2021 11:44pm
Dear CO,
This poem made me think about lines you just don’t cross. Certain savage behaviors may be the norm but certain things are off limits and best not be touched. This write had a haunting effect for me, and I can’t fib, a kind of admiration that there is respect among the wild. Another hat tip write my friend.
H🌷
This poem made me think about lines you just don’t cross. Certain savage behaviors may be the norm but certain things are off limits and best not be touched. This write had a haunting effect for me, and I can’t fib, a kind of admiration that there is respect among the wild. Another hat tip write my friend.
H🌷
20th Sep 2021 11:28am
18th Sep 2021 11:45pm
20th Sep 2021 11:29am
19th Sep 2021 11:03am
Life imitating art imitating life. You cut deep with a knife so sharp you never feel the cut. I know someone that would be warmed by your prose. Peace, Richard
20th Sep 2021 11:29am
Anonymous
21st Sep 2021 11:01am
It's that age old known, Once, even a drop of blood has spilt, the potential for a feeding frenzy probably increases 10 fold.... I agree with someone else that I spoke to earlier.... It should be about the poetry, not the creation of dramatic carnage....
Your words and the way you pen your specific poems, leave indelible marks, Cipher. I applaud you and your strong sense of open and loving writing...
It's a highlight and some of my favorite time, reading.
Thank you, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Your words and the way you pen your specific poems, leave indelible marks, Cipher. I applaud you and your strong sense of open and loving writing...
It's a highlight and some of my favorite time, reading.
Thank you, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
22nd Sep 2021 1:36pm
There is this certain something that radiates.
This certain something,
You have brought into my life with your very special energy.
And I am deeply grateful for that.
This certain something,
You have brought into my life with your very special energy.
And I am deeply grateful for that.
