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Headache ( A Love Story )
Misery loves company
I love you
Let's eat some Tex-Mex
Couple of margaritas
Maybe fuck
Before the headache sets in
I love you
Let's eat some Tex-Mex
Couple of margaritas
Maybe fuck
Before the headache sets in
Published 18th Sep 2021
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18th Sep 2021 11:25pm
I really like the last 6 lines.
What an approach, or as they say in the PUA, way to "maintain frame."
The DGAF irony makes this work.
Honest critique: not sure about the 1st line, "misery loves company." Thought, "What would happen if that were the title?" But "Headache (A Love Story)" is a great title.
So I don't know.
Again, enjoyed the DGAF irony...
& LIKED!
What an approach, or as they say in the PUA, way to "maintain frame."
The DGAF irony makes this work.
Honest critique: not sure about the 1st line, "misery loves company." Thought, "What would happen if that were the title?" But "Headache (A Love Story)" is a great title.
So I don't know.
Again, enjoyed the DGAF irony...
& LIKED!
19th Sep 2021 00:27am
19th Sep 2021 1:26am
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20th Sep 2021 2:58am
Hey PS…….ooo Tex-mex with Peach Crown…….plus sex…….yes yes…….outstanding…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Sep 2021 3:34am
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