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Endearingly Human
gray streaks
stretch marks
uneven teeth
liver spots
arthritic joints
limps and lisps
snores in slumber
farts with snorts
snorts with laughter
perfect
imperfections
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
stretch marks
uneven teeth
liver spots
arthritic joints
limps and lisps
snores in slumber
farts with snorts
snorts with laughter
perfect
imperfections
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 16th Sep 2021
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16th Sep 2021 9:11pm
I think many of us only become comfortable and acutely aware of our bodies when we hit our 40’s because it’s all the more apparent that once we hit our 50’s, and beyond, there’s definitely no going back as gravity has a firm grip on our flesh.
Love the truth wrapped up here; endearingly human, indeed…🎩
Love the truth wrapped up here; endearingly human, indeed…🎩
17th Sep 2021 3:11am
17th Sep 2021 00:27am
so beautiful and true
beauty fades we are human after all
that you find even her flaws as endearing should be cherished...
beauty fades we are human after all
that you find even her flaws as endearing should be cherished...
17th Sep 2021 3:11am
17th Sep 2021 1:16am
17th Sep 2021 3:10am
17th Sep 2021 7:43am
Enjoy the short lines and the punchy rhythm;
Takes an easy out, and that leaves this reader thinking about what could have been.
Enjoyed!
Takes an easy out, and that leaves this reader thinking about what could have been.
Enjoyed!
22nd Sep 2021 11:46pm
