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tedium
it's windy inside me
cultivated sin
like me or not I am
I'm a witch of seasons
turn and seek me in the dark
it will only hurt once
my bite deadly
you'll feel my pain
lonesome streets backroom innuendos
it's all tedious
men of stature and some without class
roaming around my garden like they belong there
I watch from within my sacred halls
sanctity in truth
my honesty is kept pure
I will let you have the vixen
you'll never know the Queen
Published 12th Sep 2021
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13th Sep 2021 6:24am
interesting poem.
The disposition of the speaker is memorable--willing to let these men roam her garden...
Lines that intrigue: "[they'll] feel [your] pain"
"[you] will let [them] have the vixen"
Reminds me of a French movie, "Baise-moi" where a lesbian surrenders to a gang-rape, rather than fight back, as her lover does.
The lover's incredulous the other one didn't resist. The one who surrenders says, "I don't keep anything of value there."
Enjoyed!
The disposition of the speaker is memorable--willing to let these men roam her garden...
Lines that intrigue: "[they'll] feel [your] pain"
"[you] will let [them] have the vixen"
Reminds me of a French movie, "Baise-moi" where a lesbian surrenders to a gang-rape, rather than fight back, as her lover does.
The lover's incredulous the other one didn't resist. The one who surrenders says, "I don't keep anything of value there."
Enjoyed!
14th Sep 2021 2:17pm
... You have such a magical beautiful mysterious persona, as conveyed through your art.
... I think we exist in a day and age that is perhaps beyond royalty, or rather, a day and age where every man and woman is capable of ascending a throne, perhaps.
... You are definitely a queen.
I love the statements you make. They are cosmic and written in stars.
... I think we exist in a day and age that is perhaps beyond royalty, or rather, a day and age where every man and woman is capable of ascending a throne, perhaps.
... You are definitely a queen.
I love the statements you make. They are cosmic and written in stars.
13th Oct 2021 3:56pm
I liked that last stanza, like saying we can't have it all.
Wonderful spill Crimsin.
Wonderful spill Crimsin.
13th Oct 2021 4:11pm
good morning dearest Wally thank you I think we all need to reserve parts of our self for just us I deeply appreciate your thoughts💗
