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[ Minimal Isms ] I tried to write you a minimalist poem
but ironically, it was too much!
like building a tiny home
---not enough room for you
even less for me
with an incredible view
outside the window
in the scope of what it could be . . .
but ultimately, it felt as though
we were passing right on through
and I was taking readers for a ride
in an elevator
as far broken elevators go
like building a tiny home
---not enough room for you
even less for me
with an incredible view
outside the window
in the scope of what it could be . . .
but ultimately, it felt as though
we were passing right on through
and I was taking readers for a ride
in an elevator
as far broken elevators go
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