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[ Minimal Isms ] I tried to write you a minimalist poem

but ironically, it was too much!    
like building a tiny home  
---not enough room for you    
even less for me  
with an incredible view    
outside the window    
in the scope of what it could be . . .    
but ultimately, it felt as though    
we were passing right on through    
and I was taking readers for a ride    
in an elevator  
   
as far broken elevators go    
   
 
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
True story, no bullshit;
it started out as not a lot to it
---only lines amounting to four
but ended up altogether
as lines counting twenty-four!
all the while with a really versatile
title and all kinds of metaphor
I never had ever written before
back then in a style . . .

FUCK!
I did it again!
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