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floating and fleeing
floating and fleeing
written August 13th, 2021
floating and fleeing
I spin through the air
my hair flying out
my head thrown back
spinning and teasing
my throat exposed
to the graze of your teeth
catch me if you can
playing and following
far away from the world
until your hands
anchor me here and now
touching and caressing
each other.
written August 13th, 2021
floating and fleeing
I spin through the air
my hair flying out
my head thrown back
spinning and teasing
my throat exposed
to the graze of your teeth
catch me if you can
playing and following
far away from the world
until your hands
anchor me here and now
touching and caressing
each other.
Published 11th Sep 2021
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Just a fun little one.
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11th Sep 2021 10:53pm
Nice rhythm--a swinging effect, that compliments the occasion of the poem.
The throat exposed to the graze of teeth--oh my! Watch out for vampires these nice autumn days!
Enjoyed!
The throat exposed to the graze of teeth--oh my! Watch out for vampires these nice autumn days!
Enjoyed!
12th Sep 2021 9:26am
Very nice establishment of movement.
A foundation of movement that set the stage for a wonderful weaving of beautiful things.
... And they are beautiful, these things.
A wonderful write.
:)))
A foundation of movement that set the stage for a wonderful weaving of beautiful things.
... And they are beautiful, these things.
A wonderful write.
:)))
