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NIGHT AND DAY
ain't nothing
the night
couldn't fix
if only it would last
forever
i pull the shade
but there's no
fooling the day
fucker
creeps in
through the cracks
the night
couldn't fix
if only it would last
forever
i pull the shade
but there's no
fooling the day
fucker
creeps in
through the cracks
Published 11th Sep 2021
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11th Sep 2021 5:33pm
Dear J,
LOL. That F-er does creep through the cracks. I can so relate to this gem of a write. H🌷
LOL. That F-er does creep through the cracks. I can so relate to this gem of a write. H🌷
11th Sep 2021 8:18pm
Yes it does.
Thank you, Honoria, for reading and commenting.
Always appreciated.
J.
Thank you, Honoria, for reading and commenting.
Always appreciated.
J.
12th Sep 2021 1:06pm
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14th Sep 2021 5:38pm
I love the night! and you have represented it's nobility and strength so well here. But the day is definitely always creeping around the corners; and no matter how hard you try to keep it out, you always know when it knocks.
15th Sep 2021 1:43pm
Thank you for reading, Kristina.
What you say is true -- seven AM and the day is always waiting just outside my window with all its mischief and mayhem and whatever joy I can find in it.
Thanks again.
J.
What you say is true -- seven AM and the day is always waiting just outside my window with all its mischief and mayhem and whatever joy I can find in it.
Thanks again.
J.
