grief

From your darkness you have created a thing of beauty. This is a lovely poem.

thank you dearest poet for the beautiful comment...I deeply appreciate it❤

It's hard to shake sometimes but all that’s needed often is a kind word or a hug or ..... both

Sending them...

Do you feel it

X

thank you dearest Poet yes I feel the warmth in my soul...sending them your way as well❤

A beautiful thing carved out of the hurt, words sculptured from pain
A thing of beauty created
Love and light
Ron xx

Awe Crim…….my beautiful friend…….feeling your pain spilling out in every heart touching line…….thank you for sharing such sad beauty with us……if you need anything please let me know…….purple luv……hugs & prayers your way xo :)

I like how the inner psycho-spiritual state is made material, externalized. It's what I missed in the other poem, "Cold," which you published concurrent with this one.
I like how you casually, caustically address the minions and familiars that torment you--Great stuff. Very enjoyable!
These are elements that can be combined to create powerful poems:
the clear, un-sentimental self-knowledge, as in "Cold";
the externalizing / materializing of the psycho-spiritual world, so a reader can vicariously experience it;
the casual dramatization of addressing your inner demons and minions in a believable way--
Ingredients to good stuff!
Potential!
Liked!

As a Nihilist my search for human perfection often leads to melancholia. Sadly beautiful ink, C.

Cheers...Harry

Dear B,

As always your raw bare bones honesty and openness is so amazing. How you manage to take these emotions and create something viable to express yourself and in turn help others is truly awesome. I’m cyber spacing you warm hugs. H🌷

Your darkness is as beautiful as your light.  Your depth is as beautiful as your height.

...  I do so love your writing.

Always, always.... sending (hugs)... ✨ 💫 ✨




I hear you, sweet poetess-🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo - B

Such powerful and compelling imagery that truly illustrates how it feels to walk through the darkness and cold of depression. The pain and suffering that consumes and torments the mind with madness. I feel the jagged cuts is so meaningful; sometimes this is a true manifestation of trying to physically cut through the pain. Those demons are always stirring and waiting for an opportunity to drag us to hell and that long corridor can seem to go on forever. Sending more hugs in the hope that you feel better during this difficult time.

Another tough write which you spilled so honestly. Those bouts that come and go feel like a swing,  you don't know who long it may be until you pick up again.

Thank you for sharing. Hope all is well.