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Minimalist
whenever you arrive
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whenever you arrive
i don't ask
for a crowd
of facades
i pray
you arrive
stripped to
the bone.
Written by
_feral
Published
9th Sep 2021
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9.09.21
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#minimalist
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Re. whenever you arrive
brokentitanium
(k.)
9th Sep 2021 10:58pm
Yes, please - this. No extra bullshit here, which means it totally makes its point in form as well as in content. Perfect.
❤k
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Razzerleaf
- Edited 9th Sep 2021 11:28pm
9th Sep 2021 11:27pm
just being ones self is hard to attain but there is something quite special about the moments when we achieve it. Love how you capture the need for those moments in your poem. Keith
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cold_fusion
10th Sep 2021 1:09am
talk about blasting the bloody bull's eye and the board...
Gem mate!
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