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lava-like daydreams
I am
dayglow
Radiating outward
Pulsing pure molten ore
Scorched heated
life itself
Kiln hot—
I instinctually
burn
from just
the
s l i g h t e s t
thought.
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Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 10:33pm
Amazing use of photo..oh, to be lava-burned by you, amazing and talented Princess. Hugs and peace, xoxo, (OO)
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Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 10:33pm
Amazing use of photo..oh, to be lava-burned by you, amazing and talented Princess. Hugs and peace, xoxo, (OO)
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9th Sep 2021 3:11am
Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 10:39pm
If you not cateful you might melt all the internet with yiur molten
words
But we can all wear fire retardant clothes . maybe not fashionable hey its all about gettung ckose ha ha ha
words
But we can all wear fire retardant clothes . maybe not fashionable hey its all about gettung ckose ha ha ha
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:13pm
haha...
I definitely try to do my best! 🔥
Thanks for the lovely kind words and do be careful to not singe yourself, dear poet!
*wink
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
I definitely try to do my best! 🔥
Thanks for the lovely kind words and do be careful to not singe yourself, dear poet!
*wink
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 10:54pm
At last how many times have I told you,you're HOT I'm delighted you finally agree with me
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
Noooo.... hahaha... .I'm waaaaay too humble —I'm referring to a feeling, not necessarily a visual ... I couldn't figure out another pic that would work for this piece so editing this one seemed like an option....... You're far far far too kind my friend 🙏🏻
So glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the RL add and your awesome comments, I am deeply appreciative...
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
So glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the RL add and your awesome comments, I am deeply appreciative...
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 11:32pm
You are a hot woman. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:13pm
Re. lava-like daydreams
Looks like I'll need my bellows to stoke the heat; leather gloves and poker to handle the molten ore. My hammer and anvil stone for transforming into the desired final state; and then fluid deluge to quench the burning heat.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:24pm
Sounds like quite the diligent blacksmithing feat, Leo! .... Oooo.... How the mind does wonder about the pure strength and stamina needed... to pound the needed form into submission.. 💪🏻 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 ... to have a pure artist's eye, creating the desired result of sated statuesque glory...
I am so lost within that dreamy descriptive moment....Thanks for the yummy imagery, my dear poet 🌋
I love your visits.... so. much!!
🌹 - 💙
B
I am so lost within that dreamy descriptive moment....Thanks for the yummy imagery, my dear poet 🌋
I love your visits.... so. much!!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lava-like daydreams
8th Sep 2021 11:56pm
With that pic, this piece is intense. Your skill set doesn't stop simply with poetry, tight work lady
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:25pm
I thank you for sharing your thoughtful comments, Me.... glad you enjoyed and I'll always bask in your 'tight work'!!
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 1:28am
thoughts have a way about themselves.
the slightest can be the most potent.
less is more.
liked the picture...different.
enjoyed reading..as always.
the slightest can be the most potent.
less is more.
liked the picture...different.
enjoyed reading..as always.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:30pm
Yes, I was drawn to the minimalism, here... Yes you're so right, sometimes less IS more!
I am glad you enjoyed my little write and the 'in the moment' decision to use that edited selfie... which I wasn't sure would work.... Just a whim!
Thank you for reading and for your extremely thoughtful kind remarks, Ms!
You make me smile ☺
🌹 - B
I am glad you enjoyed my little write and the 'in the moment' decision to use that edited selfie... which I wasn't sure would work.... Just a whim!
Thank you for reading and for your extremely thoughtful kind remarks, Ms!
You make me smile ☺
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 1:31am
Hot Shot!!!! Love it, Blue.
Cheers...Harry
PS When you coming downunder to Ozland lol?
Cheers...Harry
PS When you coming downunder to Ozland lol?
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:33pm
haha!!!
It definitely is a bucket list place of mine to visit, that's a certainty!! As soon as covid isn't the major barrier to us living our best international lives!!
I am so appreciative of all your loveliness, Harry!
Thank you so so much - 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
It definitely is a bucket list place of mine to visit, that's a certainty!! As soon as covid isn't the major barrier to us living our best international lives!!
I am so appreciative of all your loveliness, Harry!
Thank you so so much - 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
10th Sep 2021 00:43am
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 2:19am
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
Thanks so much, DG...
I bet you do, your poems leave no doubt!
Thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, I really enjoy seeing you 🦋
I hope you are doing well -
🌹 - B
I bet you do, your poems leave no doubt!
Thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, I really enjoy seeing you 🦋
I hope you are doing well -
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 3:57am
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:34pm
Glad you enjoyed the dayglow, NG
You're so generous and awesome, with your kind words of encouragement!!
Much appreciated, dear poetess!
🌹 - 💙
B
You're so generous and awesome, with your kind words of encouragement!!
Much appreciated, dear poetess!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 8:32am
Powerful piece and great analogy - I could feel your unrelenting strength like lava spilling down a volcanoes slopes.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:40pm
🌋 Oooo... That's a fantastic and utterly lovely comment array, my new friend.... I am so grateful for your thoughtfulness and I deeply appreciate your insights.
It's always incredibly cool to see /read that there's a sense of understanding that felt within...
Warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always incredibly cool to see /read that there's a sense of understanding that felt within...
Warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:19am
Wonderful poem. Very much feel the passion. And the pic goes perfectly 😁
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:36pm
Thanks so much, DC!
Glad you enjoyed... I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts and the generous list add, as well....
—a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Glad you enjoyed... I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts and the generous list add, as well....
—a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:15pm
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
9th Sep 2021 9:41pm
Hopefully in the best possible way though.... *wink
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts....
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts....
🌹 - 💙
B
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9th Sep 2021 11:10pm
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
I've missed your presence and insightfulness, Tim. Hope all is tolerable.... Thanks for the kind words.
I appreciate you visiting
🌹 - B
I appreciate you visiting
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
10th Sep 2021 00:56am
Here's to sending you some much needed sunshine ✨ ☀ ☀ ✨....
Hang in there, my friend
I'm thinking of you and yours - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Hang in there, my friend
I'm thinking of you and yours - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
10th Sep 2021 2:40am
🌋 🌋 🌋🌋
You know it!! *wink
Thanks for stopping by and for the lovely comments, Robert
Always nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
x
You know it!! *wink
Thanks for stopping by and for the lovely comments, Robert
Always nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
x
Re. lava-like daydreams
10th Sep 2021 5:50am
Dear BV,
Well daaang girl! This poem is hot to the touch. 🔥
Plus I really like the accompanying picture.
You’d have received this comment earlier but the line to write you was wrapped around the block and I had to scroll down a million boxes to get in! 😉
(Worth the wait on line.)
H🌷
Well daaang girl! This poem is hot to the touch. 🔥
Plus I really like the accompanying picture.
You’d have received this comment earlier but the line to write you was wrapped around the block and I had to scroll down a million boxes to get in! 😉
(Worth the wait on line.)
H🌷
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
10th Sep 2021 7:08pm
ROTFLMAO!
hahaha 😂 😂 😂 😂
I am so so SO glad you braved the heat and that hysterical and total imaginary line.... ha! You made me do a classic Danny Thomas 'spit-take', while reading your comments and drinking my water simultaneously.... 💦 ⛲ 💦... lol....
Thanks so much for the belly laughs and your true heartfelt kind words.....You made my day.... like you always seem too!!
Much love and humble gratitude, dear H
🌹 - 💙
x-B
hahaha 😂 😂 😂 😂
I am so so SO glad you braved the heat and that hysterical and total imaginary line.... ha! You made me do a classic Danny Thomas 'spit-take', while reading your comments and drinking my water simultaneously.... 💦 ⛲ 💦... lol....
Thanks so much for the belly laughs and your true heartfelt kind words.....You made my day.... like you always seem too!!
Much love and humble gratitude, dear H
🌹 - 💙
x-B
Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Sep 2021 00:59am
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Sep 2021 3:52am
Awww shucks..... (kicks the dirt, while blushing)..... Thanks so much Marks!
You're very kind!
I appreciate the visit ;)
🌹 - B
You're very kind!
I appreciate the visit ;)
🌹 - B
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Sep 2021 3:15pm
Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Sep 2021 5:51am
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
Thanks Lawrence, it's lovely to see you 🦋
I really appreciate your visit and kind words
🌹 - 💙
B
I really appreciate your visit and kind words
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Sep 2021 7:46pm
Let me fire walk on your soul
purifying my spirit with burning stone
finding exquisite agony in the fire
lust leading to an existential pyre
the chains of my creation
melt in red hot passion
the phoenix rising from the ashes
to be met by tender lashes
igniting my molten core
as you fire walk on my soul
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I just now wrote this. This sounds very personal, yet is only meant to honor your art and prose that so inspires me.
purifying my spirit with burning stone
finding exquisite agony in the fire
lust leading to an existential pyre
the chains of my creation
melt in red hot passion
the phoenix rising from the ashes
to be met by tender lashes
igniting my molten core
as you fire walk on my soul
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I just now wrote this. This sounds very personal, yet is only meant to honor your art and prose that so inspires me.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
It's a true honor that you bestow, Richard!
What beautiful and touching poetry you so generously create upon my page.... I am so encouraged, excited and humbly grateful that I can inspire to the point of instant creative musing.... That's so awesome and one of the best reasons that to still be partaking of the DU experience—peer inspiration. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such wonderfully sweet remarks and incredible poetry, to boot.... I am so very fortunate!!! 🍀
I appreciate all your time and thoughtful visits, dear poet 🙏🏻
All my warmest regards and much love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
What beautiful and touching poetry you so generously create upon my page.... I am so encouraged, excited and humbly grateful that I can inspire to the point of instant creative musing.... That's so awesome and one of the best reasons that to still be partaking of the DU experience—peer inspiration. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such wonderfully sweet remarks and incredible poetry, to boot.... I am so very fortunate!!! 🍀
I appreciate all your time and thoughtful visits, dear poet 🙏🏻
All my warmest regards and much love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lava-like daydreams
21st Sep 2021 7:40am
One of my favorites of yours. The words of a woman who knows her power and is unafraid to express or dare say use it. Truly a powerful idea expertly composed.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
Wowsers, John
Thanks for the boost (I needed it, my friend!) and the truly awesome feedback. I am moved that you could feel, and wholly appreciate yourself, the intensity that I was hoping to exude.... That's so incredibly cool....Yessss!!
All my heartfelt appreciation-🙏🏻
Your kindness leaves me marveling....
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Thanks for the boost (I needed it, my friend!) and the truly awesome feedback. I am moved that you could feel, and wholly appreciate yourself, the intensity that I was hoping to exude.... That's so incredibly cool....Yessss!!
All my heartfelt appreciation-🙏🏻
Your kindness leaves me marveling....
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
21st Sep 2021 8:54am
Love giving my girl a boost. Reading you picks up my moods and elevates my senses.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
21st Sep 2021 9:30am
That's gotta be up there with some of the best compliments I've ever received, John! Thank you for sharing that moving and tender revelation (to me!).....
You're a treasure, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
x
You're a treasure, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
x
Re. lava-like daydreams
26th Sep 2021 9:53pm
Thanks you Trome, I appreciate the RL add.... You're a peach 🍑
Missed you and can't wait to read the newest erotica!
🌹
Missed you and can't wait to read the newest erotica!
🌹
Re. lava-like daydreams
29th Sep 2021 7:14pm
Watch out for those thoughts, they can lead to actions.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
29th Sep 2021 7:34pm
heh heh... One can only hope.... 🤞🏻
lol... 😏
I freely admit that I LOVE getting the bk love!!
Thanks for the read, the list add and your cool af (as fuck) comments...
Day, freaking. made.
🌹 - 💙
xo
lol... 😏
I freely admit that I LOVE getting the bk love!!
Thanks for the read, the list add and your cool af (as fuck) comments...
Day, freaking. made.
🌹 - 💙
xo
Re. lava-like daydreams
11th Oct 2021 9:36pm
Pretty intense spill. I like the liquid-like vivid detail, both in visual and words.
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
14th Oct 2021 2:01pm
Sometimes intensity is needed and required!! Glad you felt that dayglow, my friend 🙏🏻
I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments and you taking the time, you do.
It's always my pleasure to see you 🦋
Be well today!
🌹 - B
I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments and you taking the time, you do.
It's always my pleasure to see you 🦋
Be well today!
🌹 - B
Re. lava-like daydreams
28th Sep 2022 2:38am
This is hotter than a lava lamp and more luminescent than a newborn star. I am just amazed. That last line took me to the realm of the galaxies. You, my sweet darling, take me into a womanly burn of cosmic proportions.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. lava-like daydreams
28th Sep 2022 6:05am
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
I am so lucky to smolder along with you, my dear.
A million thank you's.
🌹💙
-Susan
I am so lucky to smolder along with you, my dear.
A million thank you's.
🌹💙
-Susan