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The spring of her
Floral bloom of her hair
Sweet nectar of her lips
Dawning warmth of her arms
Blooming promise of her smile
Welcoming softness of her petals
Full rosebuds of her peaks
Unfurling flower of her lust
Ruffling breeze of her sighs
Raindrop pitter patter of her heart
Wild birdsong of her moans
Morning dew of her wetness
Rapturous sun of her eyes
The spring of her
Sweet nectar of her lips
Dawning warmth of her arms
Blooming promise of her smile
Welcoming softness of her petals
Full rosebuds of her peaks
Unfurling flower of her lust
Ruffling breeze of her sighs
Raindrop pitter patter of her heart
Wild birdsong of her moans
Morning dew of her wetness
Rapturous sun of her eyes
The spring of her
Published 8th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 3:10pm
Such a potently pleasurable read. Your imagery is sumptuous and lush.... I fell, so willingly, into the lovely universe of all your descriptive beauty...
Thank you for sharing - 🌹
—B
Thank you for sharing - 🌹
—B
8th Sep 2021 6:27pm
8th Sep 2021 3:37pm
I adore Spring… it’s a time for chirping birds, blossoming buds, and bees to pollinate !
Love the way you’ve translated Spring in your write…🌻
Love the way you’ve translated Spring in your write…🌻
8th Sep 2021 6:27pm
Thank you. Spring sadly seems a long way away at the moment - but I look forward to its return.
Rob
Rob
8th Sep 2021 8:36pm
Really lovely descriptive language, and the comparison between Spring and Her didn't feel forced at all. Now I'm longing for it again, while trying to embrace my least favourite season, Autumn!
9th Sep 2021 6:52am
Thank you very much. Spring is lovely but there is still some beauty to be found in autumn.
10th Sep 2021 9:38pm
Your sensuous beautiful and erotic imagery certain does seize the mind engaging all of the senses. I love the gorgeous floral arrangement and especially 'Morning dew of her wetness' ;)
10th Sep 2021 9:59pm
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Ha, a ladies morning dew is something not to be missed.
