Ended

Wow ... this one hits hard ... love the bold font in key words ...

thanks for the wow....this why i like the senyru/haiku format cause when it iworks it does punch like heavyweight

I agree ... they are great when done right ... and you do them so right ...

Brilliant! Wow!

Wows always accepted  Faith  

The hurt and pain of loss
Love and light
Ron

Aye Ron
What does the song say ...Love Hurts

The bold really makes the piece come alive.  And it does, indeed, punch like a heavyweight.  Nicely done.

As one great heavyweight poet once said floats like a butterfly stings like a bee

Been here and yes, wow.
Excellent!

Think we all have all been there

I was just here, it's fresh. Even though my poems are full of love and happiness, he did end things instantly 4 months ago and leave the country. I never thought he would be back. Again. A third time.

Your punch is indeed, so very palpable, C. So very truly gut aching! What you're able to accomplish within those 17 syllables..... Just, ouch!!

You are positively phenomenal at that ability, dear friend....
The formatting is perfection, too! 👌🏻

Excellently penned
🌹 - 💙
B

Bbbbeeeee....

as per usual you extend  lovrly cinnents each time .  In time i might actually believe i too are a poet of your stature

robot extends a (hug)
gives a🌷
sends a💋
your way .... he always did  love the limelight  ha ha

Awww... giggles 🤭!
🤖 - 💙
xo

Dear AP,

Dang! This is an arrow of truth right through the heart! Fantastic piece. H🌷

Pooooof. Gone.

Pesky witches