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Autumn Dreams - with Her
The shadows of autumn
Of dreams, we all know
Pirouette in fields of flowers
With petals at your feet
Scarlet sparks of foliage
Touched by the winds
Of sunset in your hair
The serenade of passing moments
Waiting for the first snow
Of dreams, we all know
Pirouette in fields of flowers
With petals at your feet
Scarlet sparks of foliage
Touched by the winds
Of sunset in your hair
The serenade of passing moments
Waiting for the first snow
Published 8th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Thank you, Her, for collaborating.
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8th Sep 2021 6:30am
8th Sep 2021 7:18am
It was nice to collaborate with kind Adagio.
Thank you for you generous compliment.
Thank you for you generous compliment.
8th Sep 2021 3:01pm
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31st Oct 2023 6:47pm
Hello Adagio. I HAD to bump this today. You were the first poet to approach me to do a collaboration and this was our first. It’s always been my favorite.
Happy autumn, my friend.
Happy autumn, my friend.
31st Oct 2023 6:52pm
31st Oct 2023 6:53pm
Unfortunately, I went to bump it and have to wait until tomorrow 🙄 But no fear, my friend. Bump, I will!!!
31st Oct 2023 7:08pm
3rd Nov 2023 10:35am
So beautiful. We rarely see snow where I live. Reading this makes me want to drive north.
3rd Nov 2023 12:32pm
