Last one's to leave

made me feel like i was right there ♥

Thank you Hashman I appreciate your comments, good to know its working. Best R

Aaahhhh.... really felt this. 🌞
Honest critique - the image makes it a bit tough to read. Maybe the picture can be muted a bit, or the font more bold? I'm not an expert in these things...

Lovely vibe, though.
❤k

Thank you BT I have made an edit to try an improve visability, great feedback much appreciated R

Dear RL,

This is a beautiful poem. I agree with all comments above, you’ve captured those final moments so lusciously. I can practically hear the crashing of the waves. All the best in the comp. H🌷

Many thanks H I really appreciate your feedback and its good to know its working Best R

Sounds like my ideal day out!  When you're first there, or last to leave when the tide's going out, those imprints you can leave on fresh sand are pretty special too.  I enjoyed this.

yes I agree fresh sand is right up there with snow and still empty swimming pools, very pleased you enjoyed this one Ellie. Best Keith