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the sunflower surrendered
to the will of the honeybee
burning up with jealousy
the sun silently watched
his stalker
Don't take love for granted
to the will of the honeybee
burning up with jealousy
the sun silently watched
his stalker
Don't take love for granted
Published 5th Sep 2021
Author's Note
An old write... It was written for a comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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5th Sep 2021 7:26pm
You are my inspiration and the reason why I am writing now my dearest friend!!! Such a lovely piece!!
5th Sep 2021 7:30pm
You are a very beautiful soul, dear RFC.... And I'm so touched by what have you said.... Thank you... Thank you so much, dearest 🌷🌷🌷
5th Sep 2021 7:40pm
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6th Sep 2021 9:51am
a motivating piece with great morale.. adore the personification put to lovely use. ;)
well wishes,
~d
well wishes,
~d
6th Sep 2021 9:55am
Thank you for stopping by, dear poetess... I sincerely appreciate your lovely review. 🌹
6th Sep 2021 11:42am
6th Sep 2021 11:55am
10th Sep 2021 9:51pm
Such a wonderful message so perfectly delivered. Sometimes we need to be reminded how sweet the honey is. :)
22nd Sep 2021 8:20pm
22nd Sep 2021 9:41pm
This has made me immensely happy 😊😊😊... Thanks a lot, dear poet for exploring my work 🌹
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4th Oct 2021 5:59pm
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4th Oct 2021 6:43pm
Thank you, dear poet for your lovely feedback... Very much appreciate you taking the time to explore my work 🌹🌹🌹
24th Dec 2021 7:27pm
When it comes to love, don't hesitate. A valuable lesson in your poem.
Happy Holidays! 🦌🎅
Happy Holidays! 🦌🎅
24th Dec 2021 7:33pm
1st Feb 2023 3:04pm
The poem is Dark and holds a rich narative in a few words.
The art is light and strong.
Regards
james
The art is light and strong.
Regards
james
2nd Feb 2023 7:43am
Thank you, dear James. I'm so grateful to you for your kind support. Much thanks🌹🌹🌹
