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A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)

Author's Note
For the Sept haiku theme of leaves and the Sept senryś theme of birth... (a two for!)
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Nostalgic breezes
blow reminders with every
color that bursts forth
©Blu2021
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Nostalgic breezes
blow reminders with every
color that bursts forth
©Blu2021
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Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
4th Sep 2021 11:54pm
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7th Sep 2021 1:05pm
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
5th Sep 2021 00:22am
Awesome I love autum, the colours are outstanding just like your writing
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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7th Sep 2021 1:06pm
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
5th Sep 2021 4:32am
Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
7th Sep 2021 1:06pm
Thanks so much for, B
It's my favorite time of the year.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts...
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
It's my favorite time of the year.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts...
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
5th Sep 2021 8:34am
A falling carpet
summers radiance amassed
whistfulness I clasp
Evocative piece
summers radiance amassed
whistfulness I clasp
Evocative piece
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Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
7th Sep 2021 10:00pm
Thanks for your lovely comments, slip!
It's always nice to see you upon my page.... I appreciate you reading..... So much!
🌹 - B
It's always nice to see you upon my page.... I appreciate you reading..... So much!
🌹 - B
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
5th Sep 2021 8:41am
Dear BV,
Cant wait. Lovely write. Im getting very excited for autumn. Yea!!!
Two-fers! Double the pleasure.
Awesome. H🌷
Cant wait. Lovely write. Im getting very excited for autumn. Yea!!!
Two-fers! Double the pleasure.
Awesome. H🌷
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I am so green with envy!! I long for fall, yet we usually go from summer to just a mild or tepid warmth.... hahaha.... Only a sprinkling of cold days...and cool days are even more rare!
sigh...
And NO colors to marvel at.... I live vicariously!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, H.
You'll have to regale me with your lovely fall experiences, once it rolls around!! *wink
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
sigh...
And NO colors to marvel at.... I live vicariously!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, H.
You'll have to regale me with your lovely fall experiences, once it rolls around!! *wink
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
5th Sep 2021 12:15pm
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7th Sep 2021 10:04pm
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
6th Sep 2021 3:31am
The beauty of fall and yourself is hot indeed. Keep on writing you beautiful smart strong sexy woman.
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7th Sep 2021 10:05pm
hahahaha....
You're hysterical, Francisco!
Ty for sharing your opinions
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You're hysterical, Francisco!
Ty for sharing your opinions
🌹
🍃🍁🍂🍃
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
6th Sep 2021 8:28am
this reads like a breath of sweetly chilled air.. *lovelylovely*
.. bein a Fall myself, ima say im sooo partial to this write, both verse and chosen pic.. makes one open up to those reminders, whichever way they may rub. pure poetry!
so much loves n nuzzle to u this morn, ladylove♡
~d
.. bein a Fall myself, ima say im sooo partial to this write, both verse and chosen pic.. makes one open up to those reminders, whichever way they may rub. pure poetry!
so much loves n nuzzle to u this morn, ladylove♡
~d
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7th Sep 2021 10:15pm
Ohh my.... Your finely tuned loveliness caresses my heart and soul with joy filled perfection, d
My gratitude is yours and our kinship love of fall permeates through the miles...
I send out many warm filled nostalgic laced hopes and crisp apple cider fueled dreams....🍏
Your visits bring such levity and glee, dear poetess, it's my deep honor to see your beautiful face upon my page... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 xoxo
B
My gratitude is yours and our kinship love of fall permeates through the miles...
I send out many warm filled nostalgic laced hopes and crisp apple cider fueled dreams....🍏
Your visits bring such levity and glee, dear poetess, it's my deep honor to see your beautiful face upon my page... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 xoxo
B
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
6th Sep 2021 7:18pm
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7th Sep 2021 10:09pm
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
7th Sep 2021 5:23pm
Around here, tourists...even from Europe come to see the fall in the Laurentian mountains. Stupendous colors. life is not NOT giving up before winter....
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7th Sep 2021 8:22pm
I am so so SO jealous.... I long for viewing those colors again in person.... Nothing like that here... a constant of same ol same ol, in FL....
Sounds petty and a bit selfish but fall is and always was my favorite time of the year.... It's not a thing in FL because it never really happens here...
I loved your descriptions and wholly appreciate your sentiments, Robert.
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me...
Much love and appreciation,
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
Sounds petty and a bit selfish but fall is and always was my favorite time of the year.... It's not a thing in FL because it never really happens here...
I loved your descriptions and wholly appreciate your sentiments, Robert.
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me...
Much love and appreciation,
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
7th Sep 2021 9:04pm
Welcome. Perhaps you shall have the chance to come up and visit one of these days. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
7th Sep 2021 10:07pm
I am hoping to visit up north, as soon as there's some decent enough stabilization of covid, that allows me to not be concerned!
I can't wait!
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I can't wait!
🌹
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7th Sep 2021 10:17pm
I know. Coming to Montreal by plane you have to show a covid test (no older than 3 days). I'm quite sure something similar must be the case when landing in the US. I think I will stop by the US consulate and ask. PS: if you are in Montreal, at least get in touch: robert43041@yahoo.ca regards, Robert.
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8th Sep 2021 4:14am
Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
8th Sep 2021 7:53pm
Very pretty. I'm reading so many lovely things about Autumn today, so am going to make it my aim to try to spot the beauty this year, instead of considering it something to be feared. Awesome picture too, and glorious colours. I did struggle a little with the font, but my eyesight isn't great!
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Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
8th Sep 2021 8:38pm
Thanks so much for your lovely comments, Ellie. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and do hope that the fall season treats you well.
I too, struggled with the font once it was uploaded on site, so I included the text of the senryś in the Author's note as well.... Sometimes that uploading process here diminishes the pic quality of text way more than I would like!!!
I appreciate your time and kindness
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
I too, struggled with the font once it was uploaded on site, so I included the text of the senryś in the Author's note as well.... Sometimes that uploading process here diminishes the pic quality of text way more than I would like!!!
I appreciate your time and kindness
🍃🍁🍂🍃
🌹 - B
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8th Sep 2021 8:44pm
Oh yes, I've spotted it now... I just needed to click on 'see more' or whatever it says. That will teach me to be impatient! I'm in my 40s now and my peers seem to be mellowing/ calming down, while I (placid in my teens and 20s) grow more impatient and easily annoyed! Oh dear!
I kind of have autumnal colouring, and do love the leaves at this time of year onwards. So I'll try to work with those and produce something soon.
I kind of have autumnal colouring, and do love the leaves at this time of year onwards. So I'll try to work with those and produce something soon.
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Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
21st Sep 2021 7:33am
You do nature with the same vibrant passion that you imbue your interpersonal poems. This just bursts off the screen for me to feel the ecstasy of your imagery.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
10th Oct 2021 7:26pm
The visual is like something that's coming into focus right at the center, like waking up out of a dream.
Intentional? You have a gift with these senryus and haikus, delivering so much with brevity.
Intentional? You have a gift with these senryus and haikus, delivering so much with brevity.
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Re: Re. A birthing of autumn (a senryś haiku combo)
10th Oct 2021 8:00pm
Hey there, W :)
Yeah, I used a filter to soften the outer edges and to focus the eye to the center of the page. The font looks MUCH better without the DUP uploader compression. It's a bit hard to read with it I know .... I put the actual text in the author's notes, just in case anyone couldn't read it... lol. (I had a problem, myself.. lol.) By the time I was done making it I just didn't want to go back and change .... lmao!!
Thanks for reading and the incredibly kind compliment!! That's sooo awesome. I really have a soft spot for Haiku and Senryś, so your comments definitely mean the world to me.
So humbly grateful that you enjoyed!
🌹 - B
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Yeah, I used a filter to soften the outer edges and to focus the eye to the center of the page. The font looks MUCH better without the DUP uploader compression. It's a bit hard to read with it I know .... I put the actual text in the author's notes, just in case anyone couldn't read it... lol. (I had a problem, myself.. lol.) By the time I was done making it I just didn't want to go back and change .... lmao!!
Thanks for reading and the incredibly kind compliment!! That's sooo awesome. I really have a soft spot for Haiku and Senryś, so your comments definitely mean the world to me.
So humbly grateful that you enjoyed!
🌹 - B
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