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Make deconstruction
into construction
& creation,
Following destruction
& annihilation,
in the supreme scene
of illusion,
As everything
Seen or unseen:
A civilization
Fallen,
Remnant & rubble,
Smoldering -
Sullen,
Sent to pieces
In places
scattered
in faces
shattered
As
All
that
mattered
Ceased
to
matter
Only
to be
reconfigured
Published 4th Sep 2021
Author's Note
... Thinking about deconstructionism.
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4th Sep 2021 9:28pm
Dear CO,
I found this poem very interesting in picturing as well as currently living the deconstruction of everything I once knew and could rely on- just disappear. The replacements mean nothing to me and no one seems to care that my world has been erased. It’s an unsettling feeling. This poem sums up these feelings exceedingly well. H🌷
I found this poem very interesting in picturing as well as currently living the deconstruction of everything I once knew and could rely on- just disappear. The replacements mean nothing to me and no one seems to care that my world has been erased. It’s an unsettling feeling. This poem sums up these feelings exceedingly well. H🌷
5th Sep 2021 1:03pm
So profound H. Thank you so much for sharing this sincerity.
... I think that the deconstruction, of which you speak, is purely destruction, that lacks all artistry. (or is art of a dark nature, which is incapable of creativity.)
... I hear you Dear H. And I am with you.
Sending you my most heartfelt energies.
)))(((
... I think that the deconstruction, of which you speak, is purely destruction, that lacks all artistry. (or is art of a dark nature, which is incapable of creativity.)
... I hear you Dear H. And I am with you.
Sending you my most heartfelt energies.
)))(((
5th Sep 2021 8:45am
The cracks are appearing everywhere god only knows if they can be repaired, but your constructions breeds optimism
5th Sep 2021 1:04pm
6th Sep 2021 11:10am
Again ... a great visual with this ... the variation in line length ... awesome flow ... with a nice philosophical depth to it ... bravo Cipher ...
6th Sep 2021 1:56pm
Thank you for these constructive words.
... I have been learning so much from you.
... I appreciate you Lil.
... I have been learning so much from you.
... I appreciate you Lil.
