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A short love poem
if you love expecting
to get something in
return, then you are
loving for the wrong
reason.
love adds to,
not subtracts from.
Published 1st Sep 2021
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2021 6:29am
Short and bittersweet, is the truth....
Nicely poeted, bk ;)
🌹 - 💙
—B
Nicely poeted, bk ;)
🌹 - 💙
—B
1st Sep 2021 2:48pm
1st Sep 2021 6:47am
Dear BK,
I love this. I’m not anything close to achieving this yet I love its truth. Beautiful piece. H🌷
I love this. I’m not anything close to achieving this yet I love its truth. Beautiful piece. H🌷
1st Sep 2021 2:50pm
Thank you, Honoria. Truth is in the mind of the thinker...or something like that?
hugs/love,
buddhakitty.
hugs/love,
buddhakitty.
1st Sep 2021 7:41am
Love has a reason that reason does not know; love goes all the way.
Wonderfully thought provoking write.
Selflessness... A beautiful concept/truth.
Wonderfully thought provoking write.
Selflessness... A beautiful concept/truth.
1st Sep 2021 2:51pm
1st Sep 2021 11:19am
1st Sep 2021 2:52pm
1st Sep 2021 2:23pm
So very true. It reminds me of people saying “love hurts”. It really doesn’t. What hurts is disappointment from failed expectations.
Which brings us back round to your piece.
Nicely penned.
Which brings us back round to your piece.
Nicely penned.
1st Sep 2021 2:55pm
Agree completely with the expectations part. I often need to do a reality check with my expectations.
Thank you for the kind words Eerie.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the kind words Eerie.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th Oct 2021 5:48pm
6th Oct 2021 6:28pm
