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The Diver
perhaps she swam too deeply
warm rivulets
undulating behind ribs
lungs full
of above air essence
with eyes open
she scans the rippled sands
his breath leaving traces
exhaled prints
he wanted to see her
wet
that he might drown
in her beauty
beneath the surface
dreamily
she floats
warm rivulets
undulating behind ribs
lungs full
of above air essence
with eyes open
she scans the rippled sands
his breath leaving traces
exhaled prints
he wanted to see her
wet
that he might drown
in her beauty
beneath the surface
dreamily
she floats
Published 31st Aug 2021
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31st Aug 2021 7:29pm
1st Sep 2021 00:50am
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1st Sep 2021 6:58am
Dear J,
Celestial and quite beautiful. Reminded me of the greats like Browning and Dickinson in the soft and old world beauty of writing style. Lovely piece. H🌷
Celestial and quite beautiful. Reminded me of the greats like Browning and Dickinson in the soft and old world beauty of writing style. Lovely piece. H🌷
