Before the Storm

I like the rhythms here.
Honest critique:  why not change the title to the author's note? The title doesn't say much that isn't already in the poem.
Another question:  is the storm literal or metaphor?  
The author's note suggests it's a metaphor.
Enjoyed!
The painting is nice--looks  a little bit like a Bushmill's fuzzy valencia tastes--orange juice & Frangelico...

She's lying next to me, suggest you ask her ...

Thx Mark

Oh, the taste that lingers....more...Hugs and peace, O xo

Let it run down your chin son ....

Yesssssssssssssssssssss and more

hi there dearest poet succulent seduction
beautiful painting I love this so sexy...

I try to be topical and tropical Brenda
Scary woman that Ida

X

Yes...linger on.

Cheers...Harry

Don't let a drop escape you
You'll both be happy ..

The nectar of love taste very good.  Keep on writing.

Consume daily

Live a long life