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Elizabethan
She had a certain -
Law school cool,
I thought,
or perhaps
I just tend to see people in a certain light.
She was quick
To complain,
Showing a server
Her disdain.
I admired her ability to take a stand.
Then she went apoplectic
About
Something
That I genuinely did not understand
And
I consider myself to be understanding
Sometimes something
like
Laissez Faire -
Certainly fair
always there
to care,
Even after heart break disaster.
She became
a labyrinth inside of a tear
And I became
a Scorpio ascendent
Serpent -
Watching
Eyes -
Pulsating
Published 29th Aug 2021
| Edited 30th Aug 2021
Author's Note
I was recently contacted by a woman I used know...
I am inspired deeply by the concept of "the examined life"...
So I decided to look for the poem. :)))
I am inspired deeply by the concept of "the examined life"...
So I decided to look for the poem. :)))
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29th Aug 2021 1:26pm
29th Aug 2021 2:28pm
29th Aug 2021 5:05pm
o O! As a Scorpion I can fully appreciate this. We are watchers connecting the dots until a pattern forms.
My father told me once to always pay attention to how people treat those who can be of no use to them. Such behaviour reveals their true character, and distinguishes them as gentlemen, or not.
My father told me once to always pay attention to how people treat those who can be of no use to them. Such behaviour reveals their true character, and distinguishes them as gentlemen, or not.
30th Aug 2021 12:21pm
So true A.
Your father was a very wise man.
Your wonderful insight/wisdom continues to inspire me deeply.
Thank you my friend.
Your father was a very wise man.
Your wonderful insight/wisdom continues to inspire me deeply.
Thank you my friend.
29th Aug 2021 9:42pm
Nicely penned ... resonates with this Scorpio ... really like the stretched out nature of the poem ... fits perfectly ...
30th Aug 2021 12:22pm
Very cool Lil.
Thank you for sharing your perspective with me; that is very helpful to me, and makes me think.
Thank you for sharing your perspective with me; that is very helpful to me, and makes me think.
30th Aug 2021 9:48am
30th Aug 2021 12:24pm
Thank you Slip.
That is a wonderful compliment. I deeply appreciate your perspective.
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That is a wonderful compliment. I deeply appreciate your perspective.
...
30th Aug 2021 9:48am
30th Aug 2021 10:38pm
It is said that Scorpio had two ruling planets for aeons, and being an Aries, I can easily recognise the combative but warrior like traits of Mars in ones lovely writ.
Your pen is precious…🕊
Your pen is precious…🕊
31st Aug 2021 2:00pm
I love the insight of this wonderful comment.
... You honor me greatly with your words.
Thank you Shadow.
... You honor me greatly with your words.
Thank you Shadow.
