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Inside Denial - with Crimsin
My drink of choice,
the inside of a coffin
of a gothic poem, tequila
served with nightmares
yet the dark has no teeth
but screams with a voice,
"What the Hell am I doing here?"
teaming with riddles unspoken
livid nature comes when bidden
greedy intentions come to the front of the skull
it takes a great deal of need to summons the void
pulling inside you with the bitterness of dead
starting in your stomach then goes to your head
plunder your guile
screams from the edge appeased
inside of your denial
darkness peaks then take pieces of you with it
the bleak has spoken
with tears from a lime
bits of you curl up and die inside you
the inside of a coffin
of a gothic poem, tequila
served with nightmares
yet the dark has no teeth
but screams with a voice,
"What the Hell am I doing here?"
teaming with riddles unspoken
livid nature comes when bidden
greedy intentions come to the front of the skull
it takes a great deal of need to summons the void
pulling inside you with the bitterness of dead
starting in your stomach then goes to your head
plunder your guile
screams from the edge appeased
inside of your denial
darkness peaks then take pieces of you with it
the bleak has spoken
with tears from a lime
bits of you curl up and die inside you
Published 22nd Aug 2021
Author's Note
Many thanks to Crimsin for agreeing to collaborate
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22nd Aug 2021 7:33pm
hello dearest Adagio thank you for opening the dark doorway inside me
I think it's been needing release for some time now...
I really like the way this turned out....
I think it's been needing release for some time now...
I really like the way this turned out....
22nd Aug 2021 7:37pm
22nd Aug 2021 7:48pm
my apologies small edit... "plunder you rage and guile" should be "plunder your rage and guile" sorry I do that a lot...
23rd Aug 2021 10:29am
Dear B and A,
Congratulations on this collaboration. Your voices have blended so well together creating this dark sense of bewilderment within the poem. Well done. H🌷
Congratulations on this collaboration. Your voices have blended so well together creating this dark sense of bewilderment within the poem. Well done. H🌷
23rd Aug 2021 5:00pm
