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Oumuamua
Self image, the rampart
that divides -
the self from the self,
the mind from the heart,
The heart from the soul,
Sometimes in need -
of an object from space
endowed with sincerity
and calibrated perspective,
To stir the senses,
Awakening the organism
to receive truths
from far away stars
in measurements
Of endless thoughts,
originating
in the gaze of your wishes
cast out in dark
Nights of the soul,
When traveling tears
migrated for aeons
as below
so above
Only you know
what
is
Love.
Published 21st Aug 2021
Author's Note
I was just thinking about how society & the world has a way of beating you down and making you feel worthless, afflicting one's self image.
I just pictured how sometimes, if you are blessed in such a way, someone from a faraway place can enter your solar system with something like magic... Magic perhaps capable of transmogrifying these afflictions...
I pictured like... A person wishing upon a star... and the distance traveled from the star to the person, and the time intertwined with this travel, as the wish was always on its way, in order to arrive in synchronicity... the synchronicity that communicates only in beauty...
I just pictured how sometimes, if you are blessed in such a way, someone from a faraway place can enter your solar system with something like magic... Magic perhaps capable of transmogrifying these afflictions...
I pictured like... A person wishing upon a star... and the distance traveled from the star to the person, and the time intertwined with this travel, as the wish was always on its way, in order to arrive in synchronicity... the synchronicity that communicates only in beauty...
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21st Aug 2021 1:47pm
"You can't judge a book by its cover". We are envelopped by one cover, but have a zillion chapters and we change and alter everyday. Changed by our own discoveries, and perceptions and changed by how our surroundings affect us. Best enjoy the voyage....or go nuts. Kisses, Robert.
21st Aug 2021 7:59pm
Such a wonderful comment, that I shall contemplate...
...
Indeed
Toast.
Thank you Viking.
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Indeed
Toast.
Thank you Viking.
21st Aug 2021 2:40pm
Such beautiful thoughts.....
I really fell, here.....hard.... lol.
Ty for sharing, Cipher
🌹 - 💙
B
I really fell, here.....hard.... lol.
Ty for sharing, Cipher
🌹 - 💙
B
21st Aug 2021 8:04pm
For the most beautiful of Blu sky to fall seems impossible, but I must always take your word for it, there for I will imagine ways that such a thing would be possible, because, to me, you are both an angel & the sky in which the angel dwells; but in any event, whatever occurs, that is even remotely associated with you, shall do nothing but profoundly beautify the greater surroundings of the location in which the thing occurred.
My beautiful friend.
You are awesome in many ways that I can articulate & an infinite number of ways that dwell my meditations.
:)))
My beautiful friend.
You are awesome in many ways that I can articulate & an infinite number of ways that dwell my meditations.
:)))
Anonymous
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21st Aug 2021 5:15pm
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21st Aug 2021 8:07pm
That is such a profound & beautiful observation R. You always present information to me that brings me further & deeper into my thought process & my creative process, which is wonderful beyond words.
Big hugs & much love my dear friend.
:)))
Big hugs & much love my dear friend.
:)))
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
22nd Aug 2021 6:56am
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21st Aug 2021 10:52pm
good afternoon dearest Cipher I think we are on a similar wavelength
yesterday I wrote about telepathic communications between us as perhaps star travelers
your poem is so much more beautiful and complex than mine but I think there could be some meeting of the minds between us...
I love the way you write and think... I was feeling beat on by the world yesterday and wrote about this type of communication instead...perhaps it is magic...
yesterday I wrote about telepathic communications between us as perhaps star travelers
your poem is so much more beautiful and complex than mine but I think there could be some meeting of the minds between us...
I love the way you write and think... I was feeling beat on by the world yesterday and wrote about this type of communication instead...perhaps it is magic...
22nd Aug 2021 11:30am
To be connected to you, in any form whatsoever, is among the very highest forms of existence. :)))
(Your comments reveal themselves to be part of recent synchronicities in my sphere. I see such profound truth in your sentiments. I thank you from my inmost depths of sincerity for conveying this to me!)
Your Poem is Pure Magic.
(Your comments reveal themselves to be part of recent synchronicities in my sphere. I see such profound truth in your sentiments. I thank you from my inmost depths of sincerity for conveying this to me!)
Your Poem is Pure Magic.
22nd Aug 2021 6:09pm
as below
so above
Only you know
what
is
Love.
One of the best endings I've ever read.
so above
Only you know
what
is
Love.
One of the best endings I've ever read.
23rd Aug 2021 10:50am
I just very graciously & humbly thank you for this indelibly impactful comment, A.
...
You are a being comprised of divinity & the divine.
Thank you
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You are a being comprised of divinity & the divine.
Thank you
