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Shadows
Whispers of champaign -
pain is a sham.
Light is born in the background,
surfacing like ideas -
for masterpieces.
Scintillating stars
holding hands
in the mind
like the last day on Earth.
Let me dream once more
in the remembrance
of your face -
Held in the hollow
of my soul.
I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,
falling in feathers -
into ink black velvet,
yearning for purity -
thus, I have become purely
Shadows.
Published 21st Aug 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by the sight of the dawn, this morn...
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21st Aug 2021 10:47pm
good afternoon dearest Cipher oh my god this is beautiful
just yesterday I was turning over the word velvet in my mind
but it wasn't working with what I was thinking your usage here is gorgeous❤
just yesterday I was turning over the word velvet in my mind
but it wasn't working with what I was thinking your usage here is gorgeous❤
22nd Aug 2021 11:33am
That is so cool Crimsin. I love so much, your passion for words & ideas. You are a true creator. (& more than this;)
I love interacting with you. :)))
I love interacting with you. :)))
22nd Aug 2021 4:21am
Dear CO,
“ I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,” words that jumped off the page and grabbed me like a vice. Out of context I related to this because there were so many dawns I took advantage of in sadness. Your touching poem is so filled with celestial imagery it’s difficult not to float away on sunrises and sunsets experienced along with the memories attached to each.
Wonderful piece. H🌷
“ I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,” words that jumped off the page and grabbed me like a vice. Out of context I related to this because there were so many dawns I took advantage of in sadness. Your touching poem is so filled with celestial imagery it’s difficult not to float away on sunrises and sunsets experienced along with the memories attached to each.
Wonderful piece. H🌷
22nd Aug 2021 11:37am
H
Your comment is like the geometry of the architecture of a spiral staircase made to ascend to Heaven.
You are a true treasure.
Awesome & Amazing
Your comment is like the geometry of the architecture of a spiral staircase made to ascend to Heaven.
You are a true treasure.
Awesome & Amazing
