Path of Awakening

To fill those empty spaces, indeed!! ... Ohh how I fantasize and relate.... Isn't that almost everything??? Filling our empty spaces, I mean?!? It's definitely an impetus for my writing and possibly even my day to day existence.... That line, hit me terribly hard and seared deep, John.... How poignant and thought provoking.

I know that I have missed a lot of poetry recently .... I haven't been on DU as much... but this little gem, definitely caught my eye!!

I loved it, completely.... Thank you so much for sharing with us!
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xoxo
Susan

When you appear here my heart soared my dear friend. So very glad you could relate to this one my friend.  Love that this one resonated with you so deeply. Indeed that for me is what life is about. Glad you visited me here my friend. Much appreciated.

Xo
John

Beautiful beautiful word selection/placement.  This one has respiration capabilities.  So cool.

Huge thanks Cipher_O. Love that my word selection pleased you. Glad you enjoyed it.

John

Those ending lines take my breath away.  Wow.

Ljdynamic, love knowing the finale took your breath away. You gladden my heart.

John

The immersive vivid imagery pulled me in and held there in such splendor and beauty. The juniper, fireflies, forest, stars, clovers... followed by the tears, sorrow, and mourning really provided a stark contrast. Those empty spaces are so fragile - they can be filled with so much love, but also so much grief. A really lovely write.

Kristina, the depth of your emotional dance with my words resonates with my soul. You truly are a woman of passion and empathy. I feel along with you. Thank you for being who you are.

XoXoXi
John