Hope

Thanks for sharing this honest poem; it gives hope and courage for those who may be on the same road, or have traveled the same road. Now you must write and write, you have so much to share. You are sunshine in a dark world. Hugs and peace, Oral

Oral,thankyou so much. This is such good feedback. Tbh,it's the first time I've ever let anyone read my stuff,so it's great to know it's not terrible!

Remember, every day you (we) are given a set of circumstances with which we must deal; how we deal with them depends on the attitude we choose. Yesterday ended last night, tomorrow is not promised, TODAY is the blessing we have. Take a deep breath of fresh air and write...dare to say yes, dare to go with the flow...WRITE...if it's only one word....write YES!!!!

You have such a positive attitude to life;I like it!

Thank you. I tried the negative for years only dug me deeper into negativity and low self-esteem. It's the "Two men look out through prison bars, one sees mud, the other sees stars. It's a choice. Look for the star dear friend; it's shining inside waiting to be released...NOW. Remember,you can't put toothpaste back in the tube once squeezed out, so it is with life. Smile and go on....Hugs and peace, O

Dear S,

Brava to you. I enjoyed the honesty of this and the gentle rhyme which can be hard to accomplish with a serious subject.
Great piece and Welcome to DU.
H🌷

Hi H,
This feedback means such a lot to me;thankyou!

Hey Shabre…….it’s good to step back at times when laughter goes away…….always good to find your smile again……..this is a brilliant ink…….thank you for sharing…….you’re not alone here in any trial of life…….we’ve all experienced the oblivious in our own ways…….hope you share more…….purple luv & hugs xo :)

Hey Flower girl,
Yes,so many people struggle at some point in their lives. A friend told me about this site,and I'll always be thankful for that. It seems to be a wonderful forum for releasing our emotions. I look forward to reading more poems on here,and gaining inspiration.

Wow...I be your partner & your / his / her children were worried.
Reading this, I wondered how the speaker's relationship with the family was handled:  did the speaker tell them before leaving? Tell them after the speaker settled somewhere?
So many things are left out, that make me wonder.
Interesting poem...

Beautifully written. X

Thankyou so much.🙂

Nicely penned ... welcome to DUP ...

Thankyou.

Hi Cara,

This was many years ago that I wrote this and yes,my life got so much better afterwards.🙂

Thankyou,Relic. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Well done for being brave and leaving, and also sharing it with us.  I'm sure your words will encourage someone else.

Thankyou so much,Ellie.

A travel to hope  begins with a single step-like poem.  

It does. Thankyou for your comment, Marks.

You're welcome, shabre.

Older writing frames all the tomorrows

Like

I've read all your poems

You have emotion and a voice

Keep at it

Thankyou so much for your encouraging words,Poetspeak. I know my poetry isn't in the same league as some on this site,but I enjoy what I do. And there's plenty of inspiration here.

Just keep at it
Write when you feel it
Don't try and force it
You'll do just fine

Good advice;I will bear that in mind.

This poem beautifully captures the journey of hope amidst despair and uncertainty. It illustrates the transformative power of finding support and connection in unexpected places, leading to personal growth and healing. The progression from despair to newfound strength and optimism is portrayed with authenticity and sensitivity. It reminds us that even in our darkest moments, there is potential for positive change and a brighter future ahead. Overall, it's a testament to resilience, the importance of reaching out for help, and the possibility of finding hope even in the most challenging times.

Hi Louis,
Thankyou for your feedback and for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate it.

Sharon.

It's great to hear from you! I'm glad you appreciated the feedback on your poem. I'd love to connect further and continue our conversation. If you don't mind, would you be open to connecting on Facebook? It would be wonderful to have the opportunity to get to know you better. Let me know if that's something you're comfortable with. Looking forward to hearing from you!

Your poem beautifully captures the transformative journey of self-discovery and healing. The progression from despair to resilience is palpable in each stanza. The honesty in facing fears and embracing vulnerabilities resonates deeply. Your words evoke a sense of hope and optimism for the future, illuminating the path toward a brighter tomorrow. Your journey reminds us all of the strength found in community, the power of shared experiences, and the resilience of the human spirit. Thank you for sharing your inspiring story through poetry.