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Potential Waste (or One Reason I'm No Longer Married, or Differing Points-of View)
disturbed land
overgrazed
dirt
four acres
of
desert
cactus
creosote
thorn bush
she sees
weeds
wasteland
he sees
forest shade
abundance
fruits
nuts
vegetables
she sees
dirt
mud mess
he wants
gentle natural irrigation
rain collection
ditches puddles ponds
flourishing plants
lush growth
she wants
to decorate it paint it pave it
cover it up
he wants
to utilize it nourish it
watch it flourish
she sees waste
he sees potential
(C)2021 Raibeart Bruis
overgrazed
dirt
four acres
of
desert
cactus
creosote
thorn bush
she sees
weeds
wasteland
he sees
forest shade
abundance
fruits
nuts
vegetables
she sees
dirt
mud mess
he wants
gentle natural irrigation
rain collection
ditches puddles ponds
flourishing plants
lush growth
she wants
to decorate it paint it pave it
cover it up
he wants
to utilize it nourish it
watch it flourish
she sees waste
he sees potential
(C)2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 17th Aug 2021
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17th Aug 2021 9:09pm
Those are the conflicts that we have to see and deal with in joy and pain that will damage the lives of people who are looking at the glass not necessarily empty but merely half full been there done that before quest that's why it took me so long to find that one 👍🙏 like how you spilled this journey of a water bottle half full of 👍
18th Aug 2021 3:39am
18th Aug 2021 9:19pm
Wow you have alluded and related this fine awesome imagery to marriage in a sublime cryptic metaphoric way. I think marriage if done the right way is better off than being single etc. Kudos.
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
