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Point Of Entry
I never tire
of hearing that sound
when I enter you
that quick inhale
that escapes
from the initial plunge
into the juice of coveted fruit
music to my ears
and a feast for my eyes
seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender
showing me
how skilled you are
at bareback riding
and so bluntly demanding
that cock push deeper
yes, you naughty girl
I implore you
"let go and coat me".
of hearing that sound
when I enter you
that quick inhale
that escapes
from the initial plunge
into the juice of coveted fruit
music to my ears
and a feast for my eyes
seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender
showing me
how skilled you are
at bareback riding
and so bluntly demanding
that cock push deeper
yes, you naughty girl
I implore you
"let go and coat me".
Published 16th Aug 2021
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2021 4:37pm
Perfect details... sensual ink... big like!
Bravo! 💜💜💜
Bravo! 💜💜💜
16th Aug 2021 7:15pm
Favourite lines:
music to my ears
and a feast for my eyes
seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender
showing me
how skilled you are
at bareback riding
and so bluntly demanding
that cock push deeper
music to my ears
and a feast for my eyes
seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender
showing me
how skilled you are
at bareback riding
and so bluntly demanding
that cock push deeper
16th Aug 2021 7:26pm
I am totally speechless my tender poet.. what a beautiful gift to the eyes and a soft caress to the mind that has reached my imagination on this New York Monday afternoon.. mm.. I do hope you smile in the knowing to ask... just what did you dine upon last night.. those sensuous after effects to your palate... have left me at the mercy of echoing sighs.... can you hear me now.. I suppose a sweet taste is not only confined to sugar..... on that bed of my roses.. I am wishing you a great day of wonders and a soft kiss under the stars this evening... mm... me first 💋
17th Aug 2021 4:07pm
Happy to engage both body and mind. You are definitely onto something, my palette was certainly triggered to venture forth with this enjoyable musing. Here's hoping there will be more to cum. ;)
18th Aug 2021 4:22am
You lay upon a star those sultry wishes tends to come true.. Or is it wishing on a star.. either way... something will be shooting up to my soft moon... enjoy you... and be safe out there, please
17th Aug 2021 4:17pm
17th Aug 2021 9:41pm
That opener~ powerful pen play..
of the "quick inhale"-- and im sure, some lipbiting-- this is a hush of hot beauty, sir poet!
"seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender"
~ His/your pov.. so well delivered..
ever a swooning pleasure on ur page,
~d
of the "quick inhale"-- and im sure, some lipbiting-- this is a hush of hot beauty, sir poet!
"seeing myself disappear
in your enthusiastic surrender"
~ His/your pov.. so well delivered..
ever a swooning pleasure on ur page,
~d
18th Aug 2021 3:11pm
19th Aug 2021 4:48am
Hot write with vivid details, like a picture, describing that blissful feeling.
