AT RISK OF GETTING THE BENDS (quick, new write for 'ten word' - 'so you think you're a micro poet?)' competition.)

This is fantastic, and will stay with me long after finishing it.

Thank you Ellie, for your wonderfully kind comment here!  BTW - I just re-read my submitted 'Micro-poet', 10 word, DUP submission (right before I found your posted comment's response to it here) & when I did, I suddenly heard it in a different way than I did when I first came up with it, so I just now made a one word edit, where I deleted the word 'seeking' & added the word 'found' at it's end, which now feels & reads like a much better word & seems to now make the rest of the 9 other words ALL make much better sense, than my first 10 word, 'Micro poet', DUP competition, submitted poem did (?!!!?)...  so even though that DUP competition is now long over, I'm glad I was still able (here just now today) to make my newly revised edit to it, because it now reads, sounds & feels like a much more satisfying 10 word poem to me than it did before.  

 So, I hope you'll find my follow-up, posted comment's response to yours here & that you'll now get to read & compare the newly revised, one word edit I made, because I'd love to hear what your thoughts are about the tiny little change I made & whether you too like it better now (or not?) as well?  Thanks again for your wonderful initial response comments! 👍🏻☀️ ... 👁 🦋 👁

- OIN