Enjoy the strong images; the interesting metrical feet, the instinctual feel of the image & language. Nice work! I like the use of two stresses per line, which results in some interesting metrical feet. Nice subtle rhyme with resin & spoken. Any revisions: I'd try to keep the visceral, imagistic content, as well as the interesting metrical feet, in particular the 3 syllable foot with 2 stress--"WORDS RE-sin DRI-pping BRAIN" but try to make something more conventionally sentence-like, S-V, etc.