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Gazing Afar
He sits on a bench close to a line of cottages
halfway up the winding hill
staring out to sea
waves churning as the sun sets
splashing against rocks
soaking the sand
a lull that reminds him of nursery rhymes
and happier times
tomorrow’s a new day, he thinks
and wipes away a tear
halfway up the winding hill
staring out to sea
waves churning as the sun sets
splashing against rocks
soaking the sand
a lull that reminds him of nursery rhymes
and happier times
tomorrow’s a new day, he thinks
and wipes away a tear
Published 13th Aug 2021
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14th Aug 2021 10:23am
Dear L,
Amidst the beautiful backdrop the melancholy of things gone by…this reminded me of a snippet of time in my own youth. Days I thought would last forever are sooooooo long ago now. Lovely write. H🌷
Amidst the beautiful backdrop the melancholy of things gone by…this reminded me of a snippet of time in my own youth. Days I thought would last forever are sooooooo long ago now. Lovely write. H🌷
14th Aug 2021 11:34pm
15th Aug 2021 2:55pm
It's a wonderful poem, Lozzamus. In each of your poem, you concentrate on one point very deeply, which makes the reader live it and never forget it. I like the last two lines which complete the poem perfectly.
16th Aug 2021 9:55pm
I'm really pleased the poem made an impact on you, Joseph. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
18th Aug 2021 3:28pm
A fab awesome poem with soulful touches and great sea imagery. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
20th Aug 2021 9:38pm
23rd Aug 2021 1:53am
That hope of a new day that hits us all sooner or late. Love this ink L.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
23rd Aug 2021 10:48pm
