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I want to be the calm rain
that falls on you
the lucky drop
that trickles down your chin
 
I want to be the water  
collecting in your hands
against your skin
before going to bed at night
 
I want to be the drizzle
that makes you smile bright
fills puddles to jump in
and makes flowers bloom
 
I want to be the calm rain
that makes you able to sleep
with dreams that carry you out
of the room on a purple broom
Written by vistacraft
Published | Edited 13th Aug 2021
Author's Note
This is my first poem. It is about longing for love to be returned so I hope I picked the correct category. Poem style is inspired by a Norwegian author (Laars Aabye Christensen) that made a poem using rain in a similar fashion.
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