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Today
Yesterday, I wanted to die
Tomorrow, I'll want to live.
Tomorrow, I'll want to live.
Published 11th Aug 2021
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Written for the competition 'so you think you're a micropoet'.
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11th Aug 2021 6:48pm
11th Aug 2021 7:06pm
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11th Aug 2021 8:03pm
..and that is what Today is. Neither dead nor alive. AKA a living death.
24th Mar 2022 1:39am
your dark poems are such a strength at the best of times it's unreal echo (well i hope you know that)
it's unbelievable what the most simplest words can covey beneath the surface and i think many people have lived like this at some point in their lives, i know i certainly have days such as this and they hit very hard until the light decides to poke through the cracks and that's where the strength sits in your poem for all of us to read, we are infact still living out our days 😊
thank you for this little snippet
i hope you come back soon my lovely
you and your short poems are missed
love atcha and take care of yourself out there <3
-ethan
it's unbelievable what the most simplest words can covey beneath the surface and i think many people have lived like this at some point in their lives, i know i certainly have days such as this and they hit very hard until the light decides to poke through the cracks and that's where the strength sits in your poem for all of us to read, we are infact still living out our days 😊
thank you for this little snippet
i hope you come back soon my lovely
you and your short poems are missed
love atcha and take care of yourself out there <3
-ethan
