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Sits Evil
Sitting motionless
On his pee-wet bed
looking inwards
into his darkness
where swirling gibbering
voices whispers urging
pushing him further and further
in a bleakness
a terrain of desolation
in his soul
where he wanders
He remembers his wife
so beautiful
so pliant in his arms
so peaceful
he remembers the darkness
engulfing his eyes
as he looks at her
feels the knife in his hands
he slashes away the darkness
and his wife lay in his arms
in small shivery pieces
He remembers his baby
with pretty curly hair
looking at him so trustingly
he loves her so
he cuddles her
closes his eyes
and brings her over to his darkness
he looks down
his baby is headless
in his arms
her head on the fence spike
He remembers
he looks at their accusing eyes
in his desolate land
he walks towards them
they never wait
they never stop
they keep on swirling in the mist
crying out their sorrow
wailing their accusation;
he sits on his pee-wet bed
drool trickling from his slack mouth.
On his pee-wet bed
looking inwards
into his darkness
where swirling gibbering
voices whispers urging
pushing him further and further
in a bleakness
a terrain of desolation
in his soul
where he wanders
He remembers his wife
so beautiful
so pliant in his arms
so peaceful
he remembers the darkness
engulfing his eyes
as he looks at her
feels the knife in his hands
he slashes away the darkness
and his wife lay in his arms
in small shivery pieces
He remembers his baby
with pretty curly hair
looking at him so trustingly
he loves her so
he cuddles her
closes his eyes
and brings her over to his darkness
he looks down
his baby is headless
in his arms
her head on the fence spike
He remembers
he looks at their accusing eyes
in his desolate land
he walks towards them
they never wait
they never stop
they keep on swirling in the mist
crying out their sorrow
wailing their accusation;
he sits on his pee-wet bed
drool trickling from his slack mouth.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 25th Feb 2012
| Edited 9th Apr 2017
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This poem...
25th Feb 2012 10:09pm
twisted....
25th Feb 2012 10:17pm
a terrible story but expressed so wonderfully....you should write a horror movie....lol
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re: twisted....
25th Feb 2012 11:39pm
woah
25th Feb 2012 10:30pm
re: woah
25th Feb 2012 11:39pm
Woah is right!
26th Feb 2012 1:19am
re: Woah is right!
26th Feb 2012 1:23am
wow
26th Feb 2012 1:53am
absolutely insane. Very easy to imagine what you wrote, which is a little disturbing. Great work!
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re: wow
26th Feb 2012 4:11am
It was meant to give you shivers. Well I didnt win the competition, but I sort of enjoyed writing it...thanks for reading bootselectric...glad you liked it.
re: re: wow
26th Feb 2012 6:04am
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26th Feb 2012 7:32am
Outstanding
26th Feb 2012 10:09am
re: Outstanding
26th Feb 2012 1:54pm
re: Outstanding
26th Feb 2012 1:59pm
So horrific...
27th Feb 2012 2:23am
Though beautifully constructed and wonderfully engaging. You almost want to pity the man but cannot for what he had done.
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re: So horrific...
27th Feb 2012 9:36am
Oh yes. That's the conundrum. He is but he is not. Wants to be but cannot. Thanks Chandler for reading and commenting.