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shady
tranquil bleeding in my soul
grief in shades of grey
sweet torture, pain is honest
happiness will lie to you
tell you things are good
when they're about to go to hell
pain tells things straight
loud feelings of discontent
make their presence known
stop bitch you're fucking up
"feel that?
that's me kicking your ass"
in tune with the blues
ache replies yeah it's me again
"what are you in for?"
"what did you do this time?"
sorrow shines on my hurt
"I don't want to talk get lost"
bitter dreams linger in the night
tears fall but bring no relief
pain yeah that's it...truth
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Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 3:40am
thank you graciously dearest Poet you know how it goes... I deeply appreciate your presence❤
Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 4:08am
Pain is definitely honest
And when it fades a brighter Crimsin is unveiled
Scars mean you survived
and are stronger than what tried to hurt you
And when it fades a brighter Crimsin is unveiled
Scars mean you survived
and are stronger than what tried to hurt you
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Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:14pm
Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 4:30am
crimsin,
That’s me laying face down in the dirt cause your write kicked my ass!
Loved the line(s): “pain is honest….tells things straight”
Loving this write!
down2dirt
That’s me laying face down in the dirt cause your write kicked my ass!
Loved the line(s): “pain is honest….tells things straight”
Loving this write!
down2dirt
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Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:16pm
good morning dearest Down2 you're too kind lol love your comment...thank you dearest poet for feeling this write💕
Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 8:28am
When pain speaks you should listen for sure it speaks no bullshit, straight and honest wether you like it or not, pain is truth
Awesome absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
Awesome absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:17pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you from my soul for the wisdom you imparted me I cherish your thoughts❤
Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 12:25pm
Hey Crim…….you’ve said it all here…….pain reminds me I was once happy…….but as always…….I forget not to luv…….so many thoughts here……..RL for me……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:19pm
good morning beautiful Flower it sounds like your heart is broken don't give up on love lovely one it can be beautiful even through the pain of it... hugs my friend... thank you for feeling this write so deeply💕
Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:34pm
Re: Re. shady
9th Aug 2021 1:52pm
good morning dearest Oral thank you dear poet I so appreciate your visit to my pages💕
Re. shady
12th Aug 2021 4:39pm
You know, this has the wisdom of the ages all over it. You are absolutely right, sometimes in order not to feel sad we'll ignore the signs that we're going to hell in a handbasket and that pain is the motivator for people to change things.
Absolutely enjoyed the honesty in this.
Nice job crimsin.
Absolutely enjoyed the honesty in this.
Nice job crimsin.
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Re: Re. shady
12th Aug 2021 8:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally yes pain is honest it let's you know there is a problem...it's hard to ignore... I deeply appreciate your thoughts here💕