The Dreamer Awakens

I appreciate that thankyou very much, you are too kind!

Here's to hoping you carry on dreaming
This can be a time when the mind can be so alive in its heightened state
Many of life's questions are tackled in the world of the subconscious
Let those musings keep flowing

Yes it's very interesting and i will try, thanks for your reply!

Felt as if I was swaying with the tides reading this. Enjoyed it.

Thankyou... You're too kind, i am glad you liked it!

This is a very introspective piece, simple yet complex beneath: an undercurrent of meaning.  

Because you have requested Honest Critique, I suggest correcting the inconsistency in the letter I. One is capped while the others are lower-cased.  

Nominated for New Member of the Month.

Hello, I am very happy you enjoyed got the nuance of this little poem and yes i do want honest critique, i appreciate your feedback. I didn't notice that and i will address it now. Thankyou!

consciousness..
fine tuning

narrative freestyle structure..
on point

love the twist
very nice


OG respect

Thanks for that OG, i love honest feedback such as yours!

OG RESPECT

Really love the depth in this...

Thanks so much, I very much appreciate it!