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keep smiling ..
scientists say in the future we’ll
all be eating insects, whilst
at the same time insect numbers are declining
Published 6th Aug 2021
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6th Aug 2021 11:56pm
7th Aug 2021 00:37am
7th Aug 2021 5:03am
enjoy the meter here more than anything else...
The 1st line of dactyls with a feminine ending, the the trochees that culminates with a substitution, then the falling off, dribbling away rhythm of the last 8 syllables.
I've noticed this in your work before--getting speech to fall into pretty distinct rhythmic patterns.
Nice effect!
As for "science"...scientists have been making predictions for a long time.
And nobody remembers when the Royal Academy of Science (I think) declared "heavier than air flight" "impossible" (this after Orville & Wilbur's flight at KH), or all the "doctors" endorsing smoking in commercials in the 50s, or when "salt pills" were dispensed in bubble gum machines...
The 1st line of dactyls with a feminine ending, the the trochees that culminates with a substitution, then the falling off, dribbling away rhythm of the last 8 syllables.
I've noticed this in your work before--getting speech to fall into pretty distinct rhythmic patterns.
Nice effect!
As for "science"...scientists have been making predictions for a long time.
And nobody remembers when the Royal Academy of Science (I think) declared "heavier than air flight" "impossible" (this after Orville & Wilbur's flight at KH), or all the "doctors" endorsing smoking in commercials in the 50s, or when "salt pills" were dispensed in bubble gum machines...
28th Aug 2021 10:01am
