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The consciousness of my mind “Thinking out Loud”

Echo thoughts

Blue skies gray skies
I’m yours you’re mine
Question? You’re me
There’s no direction to your echos

You call my name like it’s yours
I see your shadow thinking it’s mine
You’re so sensational
I wonder why
I hear you so often
To my mind

To reality
Undeniably I hear a echo of your pain
Scarred for reason why
Can’t seem to deny
“You’re broken” a echo of your pain
Written by _Someone2000_
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Author's Note
The first time I ever wrote something
And during that time life wasn’t so good to me
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