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FOR ALL YOU WHO READ SOFTIES

What amazes me that you have been here
just for few days
and I have read two poems

I must add you have the inborn vitamin  of poetry
as you use metaphors so easily

What amazes me more
is that you have picked up
my poem
softies
I compose rarely

I came to this sight then abandoned
then returned

Life is one large ocean
full of commotion
each one must develop toleration
 to be a merged
as a part of a roaring ocean

thus settle down to calm
I shall read more
to switch over to
the fathoms of turmoils of life
you portray with such ease.
Written by again
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