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Misdirected Anger
His hand on her thigh..
Another rant on politics
Animal hunger in his eyes..
A yelp
"The world's a hypocrite!"
Every look of want she gets...
Some only think but others demand
She stands alone
Naked
Waiting for any man's command
Loss of control
Too small to fight
Power and confidence
Masters swell inside
Try not to let them loose again
Become
Become
They beckon
As a mirror shows rot
Do not
Become this demon
Do not.
Do not.
Another rant on politics
Animal hunger in his eyes..
A yelp
"The world's a hypocrite!"
Every look of want she gets...
Some only think but others demand
She stands alone
Naked
Waiting for any man's command
Loss of control
Too small to fight
Power and confidence
Masters swell inside
Try not to let them loose again
Become
Become
They beckon
As a mirror shows rot
Do not
Become this demon
Do not.
Do not.
Published 31st Jul 2021
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31st Jul 2021 8:16am
Really enjoyed this--
The point of view is understated, but tight, consistent, true to the world of this poem.
The ending is a little ambiguous, can be taken a couple of different ways, but it comes off. Enjoyed!
The point of view is understated, but tight, consistent, true to the world of this poem.
The ending is a little ambiguous, can be taken a couple of different ways, but it comes off. Enjoyed!
31st Jul 2021 8:26am
31st Jul 2021 8:17am
We all often point anger where it's unwarranted we often take our frustrations out on those we are closest to. Almost like because they love you it's safe for you yo vent your anger in their direction,
But sometimes it drives away those that we love
So I guess aim your anger carefully
Love this thought provoking read
Love and light
Ron xx
But sometimes it drives away those that we love
So I guess aim your anger carefully
Love this thought provoking read
Love and light
Ron xx
31st Jul 2021 8:35am
You are right. Conditioning vs time reversing the side effects of surviving, I guess. But I want to make those who love me happy, not have to fight as I did. That's not what I work hard for, now. So we chugulug on :) thank you for your input, Ron
31st Jul 2021 9:13am
It is, in a way. I feel for others, especially when they have suffered as I do. Anyone born with a vagina, the wrong skin/hair color in various eras already know the plight of being treated as a mentally challenged individual who is an acception to the rule. Whatever that is at the time? So, yes :)
