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pick up the pieces
puzzle
pieces on the floor
never found
empty spots
that don't belong
but will always be
missing pieces
on the floor
pieces on the floor
never found
empty spots
that don't belong
but will always be
missing pieces
on the floor
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Re. pick up the pieces
31st Jul 2021 8:01am
The riddle eats its tail
This is great, I love it--
There's a kind of mc escher quality--
What begins as pieces on the floor that were never found become empty places--but where? on the floor, which will be missing pieces, or in the puzzle, wherever that is?
Enjoyed!
This is great, I love it--
There's a kind of mc escher quality--
What begins as pieces on the floor that were never found become empty places--but where? on the floor, which will be missing pieces, or in the puzzle, wherever that is?
Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. pick up the pieces
31st Jul 2021 10:38am
Re. pick up the pieces
31st Jul 2021 2:16pm
Re. pick up the pieces
2nd Aug 2021 00:15am
Hey Hashman……..this short jewel of words speaks loudly to me……..missing of my heart falling thru my soul of lost friends……where are they……where’d they go…..yep yep……I feel this deeply……luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. pick up the pieces
2nd Aug 2021 10:46am
Empty spaces in the puzzle of life. Lost but always missed pieces. I love this poem.
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3rd Aug 2021 00:10am
Re. pick up the pieces
6th Aug 2021 4:08am
It happens. Sometimes they were never in the box in the first place. One of life mysteries.
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31st Aug 2021 00:56am
Re. pick up the pieces
10th Oct 2021 2:16pm
beautiful thought. Reminds me of a beautiful song. Eivor - piece by piece
When I am with you I feel naked
I can't hide my scars
Piece by piece
You put me together
Till I am no longer
Broken
When I am with you I feel naked
I can't hide my scars
Piece by piece
You put me together
Till I am no longer
Broken
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11th Oct 2021 10:57pm